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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg! This story was completly wonderful. It had everything! It was funny, I loved when she sees thriks penis and says it could take down tokyo! Loved that. Wish I could have seen somethin more btween djmni & nala tho. Pleeeeeese update asap or ill go nuts! Its soo good I didn't wanna put it down but it took me 20 min 2 read every chapter! Don't worry that u messed up the facts with the translator. I didn't even remember until u said somethin! When I 1st started readin, ur spelling errors drove me nuts! U got ur to's and too's mixed up and im an english grammar freak! Lol. Pleeeeeeeease update soon cuz I want nala and djmni to have babies 2gether! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Nalani,
I hope u get this since the story is still in the same point it was last time I read it 4 mnths ago. I loved the story, but I truly hope that u have not gotten tired of writing it. I've come across quiet a few stories like that. And while not all the stories were from this website it still depresses me because they were all good stories. Well, @ least I thought so. N.e. way I really hope ur just taking a time out. But please please plleeeaaaassssseeeeee, w/a cherry on top, update soon. The waits making me crazy.
Sincerely, Legair
I hope u get this since the story is still in the same point it was last time I read it 4 mnths ago. I loved the story, but I truly hope that u have not gotten tired of writing it. I've come across quiet a few stories like that. And while not all the stories were from this website it still depresses me because they were all good stories. Well, @ least I thought so. N.e. way I really hope ur just taking a time out. But please please plleeeaaaassssseeeeee, w/a cherry on top, update soon. The waits making me crazy.
Sincerely, Legair
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is best story i have ever read!! If it was published, i would beat peopel down to be the first to get it and read it over and over again.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Nalani
I thoroughly enjoyed "The Ripple of a Stone". By the time I read the last chapter I was speechless there are not many stories or FanFic writers that can do that. So Hats off to you. I look forward to the rest of the story and I plan to read the other offshoots that you mentioned.
Eagerly awaiting, Legair
I thoroughly enjoyed "The Ripple of a Stone". By the time I read the last chapter I was speechless there are not many stories or FanFic writers that can do that. So Hats off to you. I look forward to the rest of the story and I plan to read the other offshoots that you mentioned.
Eagerly awaiting, Legair
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like Nalani, but with no updates I feel this story may have been abandoned. Say it ain't so!
Is Nalani going to suffer a pregnacy as a result? If so will her feelings for Dhmni change? I hope she moves on, or he sees the light!
Is Nalani going to suffer a pregnacy as a result? If so will her feelings for Dhmni change? I hope she moves on, or he sees the light!
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was rough!I can't wait to see what happens next!Update soon!
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 33 was so difficult to finish reading; I felt so terrible for Nala! Thank you very much for updating. This chapter was so intense and emotional, beautifully written. I wonder what will happen now? We have hit a huge turning point in the story; I can't imagine how Nala will cope after what has happened. Dhm'Ni will really need to help her through this difficult situation. Thank you again for updating and being so dedicated to writing this wonderful story! You never cease to amaze me. I eagerly look forward to the next chapter. Also, Happy belated Easter.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a shocker. Beautifully done, though.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That slimy rat bastard!! Oh, he deserves to be stretched and quartered and then to be put back together so it can be done again!
And, so sweet, the budding relationship is growing.
I can't wait to see how it all goes down. Keep up the great work.
And, so sweet, the budding relationship is growing.
I can't wait to see how it all goes down. Keep up the great work.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a chapter :o
You not only can so amazingly convey the pain and anguish that Nala endures, but at the same time, you express so well the glimmer of hope at the very end. Just such a wonderful chapter though as so much happened. Triumph over Ferca and humiliation from Det. Two seperate and opposite outcomes, but both only served to fuel Nala's despair (obviously the latter more so). Despite all this, the tension is still quite thick in the air. I cannot wait to see how you plan to narrate the story from here. True, I say that every chapter, but I think this chapter was truly a benchmark for Nala and I so very much want to see how she will develop from here.
Bravo :)
You not only can so amazingly convey the pain and anguish that Nala endures, but at the same time, you express so well the glimmer of hope at the very end. Just such a wonderful chapter though as so much happened. Triumph over Ferca and humiliation from Det. Two seperate and opposite outcomes, but both only served to fuel Nala's despair (obviously the latter more so). Despite all this, the tension is still quite thick in the air. I cannot wait to see how you plan to narrate the story from here. True, I say that every chapter, but I think this chapter was truly a benchmark for Nala and I so very much want to see how she will develop from here.
Bravo :)