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you've now succeeded in making me cry three times reading your story.
this was such an intense chapter...i really don't know what to say other than your writing is amazing and that reading this story is a treat.

YEAH! I meant aja before not Ndre to mate her. I think Dhmni should get a taste of what she felt. Maybe aja is the one for her? Now after tegon I can only she friendship between them.

love the update can't wait for more. sad about her getting raped...

OMG this story is a nailbiter! very awsome i luv it so muchi hope you udpate soon pls!!

I really love that story! Don't let it die like this! You have great talent so please please please with a lot of sugar and a strawberry Update asap!

I started reading chapter one at half nine yesterday morning and finished chapter thirty-two at about five this morning. I think I am going to explode if they don't get it together soon. This is an amazing story and some of the best characterisation I've ever come across; I can't stop thinking about Dhm'ni and Nala and I feel as frustrated as they must at the total lack of shagging! Please please please please please update soon! A proclamation of undying love would be great at some point but for the sake of all that's merciful and just, please let them get it on.

Ok, consider yourself special because I do not review stories. Ever. I just spent the last 3 days reading nonstop. My eyes are just about shot (I had to increase font size so I could keep reading around the middle of day 2). I'm completely and utterly enthralled by "The Ripple of a Stone" this is about the 5th Predator fanfic I've read and It is delightful. However, since I just read everything in one 3 day shot, I have no idea how often you post. I'm really hoping and praying it is soon because I actually thought this story was complete when I started reading it and I am desperate to read what happens next. I love Nala- she's a great character with strong flaws and strengths. This whole thing with Dhm'ni is intense and I really can't wait to know whats going to happen now that there has be a challenge for mating with him. I highly doubt Ferca will will, but I know Nala will have her fair share of injuries. The real question is...what will happen between Nala and Dhm'ni. She's completly lying when she says she doesn't want to mate him- I think its more that she doesn't think he wants to mate her and thats why she's saying what she is. The sexual driven scenes you've written so far are wonderful...This is me hoping that we get another one in chapter 33 ;-).

Do you have a mailing list alerting when you update RoaS? If so could you please put me on it?

Thanks ~ J

i'm glad you allow anon reviews so now i can review easier lol. i'm horribly lazy and i feel bad that i havent reviewed simply because i didnt want to log in. i did add ROAS to my recommended reading list on my account. it's a shame the predator lovers are so small because this truly is a great story that everyone should read.
for an unbearable amount of time i had no access to AFF, i don't know why. i was incredibly happy to see you had added your stories to FF.
anyhoo, i agree with julia down below. nala was totally lying when she said she didn't want to mate with him but her fear of rejection is understandable, after all he just slept with tegon (grrrr) and now has a baby with her! double wtf! as a fellow writer though i understand this twist was needed to...nvm don't want to spoil anything. but i was disappointed that nala wasn't angry with him. i would have been furious. and i wouldn't have come to sleep with him either. so for a strong character like nala who defends herself and demands respect, she didn't act in character to me at least.
i really love the part where nala is mourning to herself that she'll probably never have a family in the predator world and was feeling lonely. i have to admit i was tearing up at that.
and where is aja? i wanted a scene with him! i think..that if things don't work out with dhm'ni or she plans to retaliate and mate with someone else (unlikely, but still) aja is a prime choice. i really like him. i like dhm'ni too, confusing male that he is. so what's going to happen with him and tegon? and will nala win the fight with ferca? i get the feeling she will. she fought the patriarch i think she can handle a yautja female. but will she mate with dhm'ni?
argh so many questions! every day i come here to check and see if you've updated so again i agree with julia add me to your mailing list if it exists!

congrats on your marriage, i hope things go smoothly and your wedding is a blast! :)
-cara

Well, if that is a quick chapter, I'm not sure I want to see a long one! LOL. Glad to see you are not leaving this one to rot. I love this fic. Can't wait to see more! =D

Awsome! Please, Please don't take so long to update next time!