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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's about time Ferca gets her ass kicked by Nala. I've been waiting for this fight for a while. Don't leave us hanging so long next time.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes!!! so glad to see a new chapter...hope you update soon.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so happy you found the inspiration to make a new chapter! Oh, and lol @ calling this a "short chapter". Believe me, I'd be happy if more fics had chapters this "short" :D
I still am really feeling for Nala, she's finally coming to terms with her situation and trying to figure out where she can go from here. She's managed to survive, but is there anything for her beyond mere survival? I wouldn't be suprised if she becomes more and more withdrawn as time goes by since the only thing she knows she can do well amongst the Yautja is fight. Reading her struggle with her feelings for Dhm'Ni is also very moving, hearing he's going to be a daddy really shocked her, of course, being a human where such a thing spells the end for any possible relationship.
Oh and of course, I can't wait to see what Nala's gonna do with Ferca, since she's definitely going to snap soon like she did on the ship after Allen was insulted.
I still am really feeling for Nala, she's finally coming to terms with her situation and trying to figure out where she can go from here. She's managed to survive, but is there anything for her beyond mere survival? I wouldn't be suprised if she becomes more and more withdrawn as time goes by since the only thing she knows she can do well amongst the Yautja is fight. Reading her struggle with her feelings for Dhm'Ni is also very moving, hearing he's going to be a daddy really shocked her, of course, being a human where such a thing spells the end for any possible relationship.
Oh and of course, I can't wait to see what Nala's gonna do with Ferca, since she's definitely going to snap soon like she did on the ship after Allen was insulted.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Finally another twistingly good chapter. More soon please. I think Nala should deflower Nder and bear him a child should she and Dhimni not work it out.
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update please! Can't take the suspense!
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nala better be prepared for a very messy scene with Det and Dyne. She's probably gonna have to kill one, or both (crosses fingers), of them.
The girls, gotta love them. I just wonder what screaming and running from the piercing will do to her status in the eyes of the Matriarch. Not saying that I would have stuck around, but, that's gonna cost her. Unless of course, the Matriarch finds something to make up for that show of "cowardice."
The girls, gotta love them. I just wonder what screaming and running from the piercing will do to her status in the eyes of the Matriarch. Not saying that I would have stuck around, but, that's gonna cost her. Unless of course, the Matriarch finds something to make up for that show of "cowardice."
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WhooHoo for updates. I do so love your stories. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so glad that you update this story. laugh my ass off about the piercing thing.
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's so wonderful when you update this story, even though it's been going for a while, it doesn't feel like it's getting old or stale at all, and that there is plenty more to come.
Wow, Det and Dyne are really sick mofos. No wonder Dhm'Ni doesn't care for his brother, he might as well have Itachi for a brother. :)
It's great to see Nala finally meet the females, and yeah, that piercing scene was hillarious. Nice homage to your other story with the name 'Aja' too. :)
Still looking forward to more, whenever you have the time of course.
Wow, Det and Dyne are really sick mofos. No wonder Dhm'Ni doesn't care for his brother, he might as well have Itachi for a brother. :)
It's great to see Nala finally meet the females, and yeah, that piercing scene was hillarious. Nice homage to your other story with the name 'Aja' too. :)
Still looking forward to more, whenever you have the time of course.
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's the best predator fanfiction i have ever read!! I haven't found better than this!(and i must say i read a lot of them)I almost every week look here and wait for the magic 31st chapter. When i was at first started reading it i was so long in front of my screen that when i stopped for food my eyes where almost red!
What would you say that Nalani would understand that she had feelings for dihmni? But of course she thinks that since she's a ooman she don't have a chance in a challenge like this (which is dihmnis hear). i know it's plain but with good problems infront of her i think it could be a nice plot.
Understanding that she is mearly an ooman (in the sexual relationship) she would back off from dhimni, which piss him of a bit ;P
But that's only a suggestion.
Just can't wait for another chapter! And i love you style of writting.
Let the god of the writter bleased with inspiration!
*P.S. Sorry for mistakes english is not my native language. XD
What would you say that Nalani would understand that she had feelings for dihmni? But of course she thinks that since she's a ooman she don't have a chance in a challenge like this (which is dihmnis hear). i know it's plain but with good problems infront of her i think it could be a nice plot.
Understanding that she is mearly an ooman (in the sexual relationship) she would back off from dhimni, which piss him of a bit ;P
But that's only a suggestion.
Just can't wait for another chapter! And i love you style of writting.
Let the god of the writter bleased with inspiration!
*P.S. Sorry for mistakes english is not my native language. XD