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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You just can't stop here. The Story screams for a sequel! Please continue!
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm...this is a good start but i think jack is kind of out of character and also, um...jack got lizzie pregnant right...and now that lizzie just lost her baby they're backto having lots of sex all night? I just find that a bit unrealisitic and that jack has already forgotten the possibilty of getting lizzie pregnant again. However your plot seems to be developing and a good start. keep up the good work. xx
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I say write lots more! *P*L*H*
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im enjoying this story, please write more soon!! :-)