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schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I love this story! Andy's so cute and family-smart! And Brian's such a nerd sometimes...oh! I can so see this happening! Ah, but I must confess, I cried. The part where Brian's grandfather died...it had me in tears. I mean it's been a couple years since my gram went...but the way you portrayed it made it so clear in my mind's eye, and the confusion and the standoffishness of the mom....it reminded me so much of when my gram went. I can't wait for an update! But don't rush it, and don't sweat the writer's block! Any chapter worth writing is worth waiting for *thumbs up* Keep up the good work, and here's some love!
<3
Crys
person bunny
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really have created the best story possible for this movie. I loved the way you did not rush things in their relationships and how well you have writen it. Please do continue i have been waiting for some updates for this story for some time i want to know more. And am curious to see how their relation ship developes. I hope it works out.
person bunny
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really have created the best story possible for this movie. I loved the way you did not rush things in their relationships and how well you have writen it. Please do continue i have been waiting for some updates for this story for some time i want to know more. And am curious to see how their relation ship developes. I hope it works out.
person Belladonna
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story, and I love the way you incorporate so many details, making it rich and descriptive. The guys are so in character, I'm very much drawn in.

I wonder, are you planning to continue it? I can see that you've been away from it for many months, and I'll admit, I'd love to see it continued. Finished.

Anyway. I just wanted to encourage you. If you're done, I still think it's wonderful, but it would be so much better to see more!
person Lornfaer
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so great! I love this story. Brian and Andy are totally in character, which most writers apparently have trouble with. Anyway, I think Brian's little tooth-fairy deed was so cute. Please update very soon!
~Lornfaer
person panicky_geekster
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eek! Oh God this story just ROCKS. Like just...is just...Ah, well...it's : AWESOME WONDERFUL AMAZING FANTASTIC BEAUTIFUL
I just reviewed on this chapter since it's 1:30am and just OHGOD. *flails*
person CC
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to finally see a new chapter. This is not a pairing I would normally read, and I'm not even sure what drew me to your story so long ago. But whatever it was, I'm glad. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
person Marianne
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read the new chapter. Great work. It's nice that you're back working on this story, it's a great story, you shouldn't abandone it. Just work through that writer's block. I look forward to reading your next chapter.
person jls2ae
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story i hope you post more i really want to know what happens.
person tifsuz
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The character development and very real emotions/insecurities in this fic is just - amazing. Great job and I plan to chack back often!