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person Dropje
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww. Woobies.:)
Poor deprived Brian, poor confused Andy.
*sigh* Those boys really need to sit down and TALK, already!
person Dropje
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Breakfast club slash!! I love this obscure little fandom. :D

Brian comes across as very sweet and uncertain, very much a teenage boy in love. Andy too comes across very nicely even through Brian POV, so desparate to please everyone but himself. And these little moments with Brian's family are great, they really flesh out the characters and make your world seem more real.

Great fic, love it lots, I hope you write more. <3
person >< !
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HA! I TOLD THEM THOSE TWO WOULD MAKE A CUTE COUPLE!!!
person Divi
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. You did a whole shnazzy thing with character development and I heart you for it. x) Write more!
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* oooh spiffyness I love it. I hate evil cliffies, but i know how fun they are too. I hope you finish part two soon, but even if you don't i will be watching for it. *grins and adds to her favorites list so she can check back for part two often*