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That was verra touching! *wipes tears from me eyes*
I liked all the endings, loved the heart ache, the funny bits, and the happy moments!
One of the best and most touching story i've read!
good luck.

This was just awesome. I don't know how you could have made it better.

A great ending to a great story. Congratulations for making it through to this conclusion. :)

I can imagine how tough it must be to struggle to find an appropriate closer for a story that has been a big part of your time for a while now. I'm just glad that you were able to settle on something, and even though you may not be too happy with it, there's always edits that can be done in the future if you have brainstorms. :)

And of course, a major big congrats on getting engaged. I wish you many happy years to come. :)

Again, great job, and I'll be looking out for updates to 'Ripple'.

Oooo...*sniffles* LOOK WHAT YOU DID YOU BAD PERSON You made me cry. This was awesome!!! I like the alternate endings but I'd really like to see one with a HAPPY ending...I like the Ugly ending best...the way you closed it with the black warrior taking Aja away to Kella...It was good.

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OK, so this one is a little better than the last. I was still crying, but I think that was what you were going for.

Please don't take too long with the final chapter. I don't think my poor little heart can take it.

First off, thanks for being one of the only writer's here who are updating frequently. I dunno what happened but it's like everyone plum vanished in the last two weeks or so.

And of course, another great possible ending for your story. Certainly not as depressing as the last one, but it was still "bad" as intended. :)

Though actually, I kind of hope you do take as much time as you need with the last ending, since that is going to be the last entry to be written for this story, it seems like it would be quite special. I'll be looking out for it, and of course, your continued brilliance with Ripple. :)

AH HA!! I see what you are doing. Very nice. Three possible endings. I like it. I can't wait to see what the 'good' ending is going to be...I do have my thoughts and hopes, but we'll see... =D

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Aja and Kella broke up! There's no hope left in my soul!!!

Three possible endings ... do we get to vote?

Well done indeed. You captured the worst possible outcome very well. I suppose my only critique would be that I would have (not saying I can of course :P) written out the final battle of Kella and her thoughts until the end. Though, I suppose that this chapter was mainly to focus on Aja since these events were the consequences of his choices.

So again, well done. I look forward to the other possible endings.