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That was the GOOD!!!

I'm near tears here Nalani. Gods, how are you going to twist my heart next.

This chapter is so heart breaking, how the Elder doesn't realize until too late, how Aja pines for her the rest of his life. And to loose Naxa too. Heart breaking, heart breaking.

Why? Why did you have to do that to us? That was horrible. I hurt from that. That was a tear-jerker for sure. Please tell me that is gets better?... Great update. Can't wait for more. =)

Ok, ignore that first line of my last review. I should really read everything in a chapter instead of just skipping down to the body of the story. Silly me assumed since it was "The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly" it would go in that order.

So, YAY!

The good is still coming. Yay!! There is hope. I love you Nalani.

Ah, so after all this time, we are nearing the end of this wonderful tale. Heh, what a change a chapter makes, from being so close to eachother to being so far apart, those pesky Ooman emotions do tend to complicate things eh? In this case unlike 'Alone' I'll have to fault the female more than the male for being so stubborn. Kella should have been more rational, or at least not so hysterical when explaining what she wanted, and then to go and cut off the mark, hmm. I'm getting the feeling her latest idea is drawn from that and her regret, she knows she'll probably die by Elder Rh'ds hand and that's what she wants now, having secured the safety of her children.

So, three endings huh? I'll be sure looking forward to them, as well as your continued great work with "Ripple" :)

Hon, we love you and know that life can bite at times. Don't worry about it, your late updates certainly out-paces mine.

I love this story and I don't want it to be over. But, gods, what is wrong with the males in this section. Kella gives up so much for Aja, and he can't find a way to keep her. Worst, he rubs it in her face that he can have these things. He's got has a lot to do to redeem himself, if he gets the chance.

Oh Man. This is gripping. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Post when life lets you Nalani I will be waiting patiently.

OOOO, sooo saaad! That is horrible! I can only hope that everything will work out in the end. Can't wait for the next update!

Please, please, PLEASE tell me there will a sequal! Kayla and Aja are so cute together. I need more!

I really hope Aja returns to Kella. They've been through too much not to be together. ^_^ I'll just bet that Elder Rhd has an idea of what's going on. You don't get to be and Elder and not learn a thing or two. Really wonderful update, Nalani. ^_^

I forgive you for being late. But I would like an update on 'Ripple' please! As for History...I almost cried when Aja saw the snow. That was very well written. The emotions were portrayed very clearly. I can't wait for the next update. =)