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I hope Aja returns to Kella. I still reackon Elder Rhd knows something. He didn't come down in the last meteor shower. lol It will be interesting to see.

Gotta love that coin toss. I've done it a couple of times.

Please, please let Aja return. Please.

Ah, another nice addition to this great story. This should be quite a new and interesting dynamic you're introducing here with the wannabe caretakers, could prove for some great experiences down the road. As always, I'll be looking forward to more for this story, as well as for whenever you'll get back to Ripple as well.

Cheers

Yay. that was great. I love the puppy interaction. I have never thought about that before. I can't wait for the next update. =)

Well, its about time.

Nah, just kidding. I was actually "The House" to be updated first, though.

Your characters just make me smile. They would have made me laugh, but thankfully I was able to hold it in. Otherwise, there would have been diet coke all over my computer screen.

The idea of training more Caretakers is probably one of those obvious things that need to be done, but nobody thinks of it.

As far as Naxa, the white Tibetan Mastiff, I don't know. Right now there is no gene for a solid white TM. Even white markings are discouraged. The Kennel Club breed standard only allows for a white star on the chest and minimal white on the toes. Unless, of course, during the war some of the Great White Livestock Guards (Great Pyrs, Kuvasok, Maremma etc) slipped into the gene pool undocumented.

LOL. I could just see the disappointment on Aja's face when Kella told him that dinosaurs don't exist anymore. One big preddy pout.

I love the Big Bad Warrior and the Cute Little Puppy scenes.

Can't help but think that Elder Rhd knows something though. I reackon big daddy knows more about their relationship than what they think he does. After all, he didn't exactly come down in the last shower.

Great Chapter

Excellent chapter. I'm delighted to actually see how Aja is incorporated in Kella's daily routine. Oh, and they now have a puppy...too cute! Somehow, I wasn't surprised that Naxa gets along so well with Aja. ^_^ And so the plot thickens (or at least reveals itself more) towards the end of the chapter. Looking forward to more when you are able, Nalani!

Don't worry; just update when you can. We'll still be here and ready for more. ^_^

HEY WERENT YOU ONE OF THE MAIN PEOPLE BITCHING THAT THER WAS NO WAY TO STOP ANONYMOUS REIVERWS? AND YET YOU KNOWINGLY TOOK OFF YOUR ‘U MUST BE LOGGED IN’ THING? STUPID FAGGOT.

Wow there's a thought. I wonder how the Elders would react when told they were having "Death by chocolate" Would they appreciate the joke? and, yes, the parsley icident was hysterical.

I really loved the sex scenes between Aja and Kella, it was incredibly hot but also tender and romantic.

Please have mercy on your readers and GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!

Kehlan

WOOT for the new chappte!! I loved it! And i also personaly do not like the govenor guy...he gets on my nerves...-___-