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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh...really loved the first part. But, wow, the banquet has turned out to be quite interesting. Poor little Mike, only trying to do his job, and he gets caught. Way to save the day, Kella! Looking forward to more when you get the chance, Nalani. ^_^
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, quite a long chapter, but still very well done indeed. I always love how believable your writing style makes your story, and it definitely holds true with this chapter and the detail put into it. I won't complain if it takes longer than usual to bring out chapters such as this, because it is really worth the wait. :)
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nalani, do you know what kind of story this is?
This is the kind of story that keeps PF up until 3AM reading even though she KNOWS she has a truck to unload at 730AM. Kudos. I got the alert and I couldn't just wait until after work today to read it so I had to stay up.
I must say I love the parsley escapade. Mmmm, chocolate. You know, mint chocolate chip ice cream is the second best chocolate. It follows closely behind death by chocolate ice cream. Now that would be an interesting concept to introduce to our hunters. Death by Chocolate.
This is the kind of story that keeps PF up until 3AM reading even though she KNOWS she has a truck to unload at 730AM. Kudos. I got the alert and I couldn't just wait until after work today to read it so I had to stay up.
I must say I love the parsley escapade. Mmmm, chocolate. You know, mint chocolate chip ice cream is the second best chocolate. It follows closely behind death by chocolate ice cream. Now that would be an interesting concept to introduce to our hunters. Death by Chocolate.
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a very awesome story, Nalani. The pace of the story is amazing, and it's enough to leave me wanting more. I have one thing to say about Aja and Kella: it's about DAMN time. ;) I will enjoy reading more later on.
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, they finally did the deed eh? They better watch out if that new mark on Kella doesn't give them away to everyone. :o
Heh, I wonder what was in those photos that forced Harper to step down as governor? Must have been something really embarrasing to have to grovel to Kella like that. :)
Great chapter as always, keep it up, even if people aren't reviewing (knuckleheads!) :)
Heh, I wonder what was in those photos that forced Harper to step down as governor? Must have been something really embarrasing to have to grovel to Kella like that. :)
Great chapter as always, keep it up, even if people aren't reviewing (knuckleheads!) :)
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Phew, is it hot in here or is it just me? :)
Talk about spicing up the story. Though they can't seem to get anywhere without being interrupted. Oh well, Kella finally has Aja in her bed now, so who knows what may happen? They just better watch out in case the Elder decides to pay an early morning house call.
Wonderful writing as always, I continue to look forward to what comes next.
Talk about spicing up the story. Though they can't seem to get anywhere without being interrupted. Oh well, Kella finally has Aja in her bed now, so who knows what may happen? They just better watch out in case the Elder decides to pay an early morning house call.
Wonderful writing as always, I continue to look forward to what comes next.
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Death God Dist.
Man can they ever get a break. Anyone would think they're a married couple with half-a-dozen kids and working 5 jobs between them.
And I can so see them being strung big time.
Another great chapter young lady.
Man can they ever get a break. Anyone would think they're a married couple with half-a-dozen kids and working 5 jobs between them.
And I can so see them being strung big time.
Another great chapter young lady.
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Back again.
I ment to say sprung not strung, although the Elder may string Aja up by his .... well you get my drift, when he catches him and Kella together.
I ment to say sprung not strung, although the Elder may string Aja up by his .... well you get my drift, when he catches him and Kella together.
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nalani, I don't know how you manage to do it. You've taken UST to a completely different level...but it's understandable. I love the whole action being drawn out, and, whoa, Aja just needs to give ALL of we girls a show, ne? ;) Really loving the story, and looking forward to more.