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for The History of Tomorrow

by vanillalace

person Shalimar
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is a great guilty pleasure. Please keep it up!
person Cara
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*mouth is open*
kella's not the only one who's aroused by aja.
heh heh. man. man man man. awesome chapter.
i just have one thing to say:
i enjoy sex scenes, but they are even better when they don't happen too soon. so don't rush into it. but still...i love the sexy tension between aja and kella. hopefully it won't be a one night stand lol.
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is all to real. keep going i want to read more
person Muse of Scrolls
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such an intense and amazing story. I do love the way you develop your characters, and A'ja and Kella are so meant for each other. Just...whoa. I can't even really put it into words. Please keep working on the story. I do want to read more.
person aquamum
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nalani,

Yet another fab story...

Love the characters and your writing - looking forward to them hooking up!!!!!
person Bee
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is really really good...quick question though, does Aja keep denying that anything can happen between him and Kella because there is a rule where Yajutas cannot mate with oomans or is it him stopping himself because he has hated oomans since he was young? That will be interesting to find out. His father seems to really like Kella so it seems like he would approve? I will just have to wait and see huh?
Fabulous chapter! I can't wait for more Aja and Kella!!
person Kehlan
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your story and am really enjoying it. Please continue.

You asked about uploading. Well, the way I do it is to write the chapter on Word and the copy it and paste it into the text box. You just highlight the text you want to copy, hit Crtrl C and then Ctrl V to paste it.

hope that helps
person Prairiefire
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, you can breathe easier. To come and suck your brain I would need to find someone like a Betazoid or someone telepathic, then actually find you, and well, I'm just too lazy for that.

Awesome job on the chapter. Aja seems cool, the Elder is too.

Yeah, the White Dragon's dead.

I feel like a hypocrite asking you to update fast, but do it anyway ok?
person Cara
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You...you evil woman. =D

I don't know why I'm smiling but how could you!
I was getting ready to go to bed, but decided to check and see if anyone updated...and wow. This was an amazing chapter. You've got skill. And you've got me hooked. I can't wait till you update again...cuz this was a real cliffie. grrr. Aja is hot. Wouldn't mind trading places with Kella.
-Cara
person angelpred
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow,wow wow...this story is always more beautiful!!!!!!
Fantastic the scene in to the bedroom....and Aja is cool...!!
Oh I can't wait to see what happens next.
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!