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for The History of Tomorrow

by vanillalace

person chancelor22
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I fricking LOVE your stories!!! I can't tell you how much! I can't wait for the next updates!!! :)
person shortest_warrior
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I think it's safe to say you've got us hooked. I love the name Bthm - Bath Him, LOL. If he needs it I will offer to bath him.

You must keep going please. This story is great.
person Tasha
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please please please continue i think i like this even more than your other story, which i love too by the way!
Boy do i hope you update this again soon, it rocks!!!
person Bee
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh you have to continue this story!! Especially now, it's getting to the good part, they know who she is now!! Oh I can't wait to see what happens next. I love that you made her so strong but still feminine and sweet! She will defintely be worthy for Ajas!!!

Please post soon!!!
person Li na
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO!!! I love this story, but you do need to get a beta. Other than that, ITS WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person angelpred
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow,this fic is very fantastic....!!Kella is a character much interesting.
The alternative story of our planet is fantastic.
Please continue this fic!!!
Please please......update soon..!!!!!!!!
Excuse me for my english,but i'm italian.....and i don't write very well.. :-)
person conncoll
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like...its very interesting and excellently written...MOREMOREMORE!!!
person shortest_warrior
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please don't take this story off. If you don't get other reviews saying "Hey don't delete continue." Write it for yourself to get it out of your head and you can always email it to me and other interested people to read. Please.Please.Please don't delete it. Please continue.
person Prairiefire
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So help me if you delete this story. I will find you, and I will suck this story out of your brilliant brain.

You seem to have a flare for giving your female leads a sadistic edge. Of course, that could just be the influence of the Predator category. Either way, well done.
person Sin
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story please dont stop i have to find out what happens