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Great to see that you decided to continue.

HAHAHAHA!!!! That was so funny. I loved it. I want more. Of both fics! Waiting...

Eee I already like Aja. =)
Kella is one kick ass woman. Great chapter, so glad to see you updated.
Can't wait to see what happens next...

Oh very interesting Nalani! I wonder if the elder marked Kella's face with his clan's symbol meaning she belongs to his clan? Maybe he marked her for one of his children? Your first chapter was excellent and I look forward to more!
Bee

I love Apocalypse stories, and this definetly had a plot that grabbed my eye instantly, I just had to read it to see if it was what it sounded like.

It was. Very intriguing. You've found a very original plotline, and I think Kella is a strong character.
I definetly have high hopes for your story, and I hope you stick with this story. No I demand you stick with it or else I'll have to steal this plot myself. It's too good. =P Congrats.

Usually new stories on here aren't that good, and when I go to the Predator section my favourite stories are rarely updated. I've added your story to my list of favourites. :)
Don't keep me waiting please!

Nooo, don't stop. :)
An intriguing start, and I would love to read more.

I really like this story and very much hope you will continue to write it. I am really looking forward to finding out what happens next. Well done!

I would definately like to see more of this. I like the possiblities it has. And I would be very disappointed if you didn't finish "Ripple of Stone". But...that's just my two cents worth. :)

This is really good. You should continue at your own pace, but please continue with it. I need to know if the high Elder is going to find her again.