rate_review Reviews

Newsflash: Not only was this a TOTAL Mary Sue fic (which I gathered from the summary, though I was willing to give you the benefit of the doubt), but 'Jackie' wasn't a name back in those days. The very least you could have done was search for names from that particular time (instead of using YOUR OWN; yeah, I know it's yours. Or it's your fantasy name. Either way...) - or is that asking too much? Obviously yes.