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for The Last Soul

by Darkaus

schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay...that first chapter is just a stunner...then end of the world, no more souls. Just awe-inspiring!
imagery was very clear, the dialogue between Xipe and the Archangel was right on target. A wonderful first chapter..

and five more to go! Great work!
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now...that was good! I'm not the biggest fan of Hellraiser, believe me, reineSeele had tried...but your story I can get into! Beautiful descriptions, you make the characters come to life...the only problem...only five chapters! More, please!
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how much I frikkin love this story. I read........everyday, lol. I love Hellraiser and you're so wonderful with the characterizations and the voices. I absolutely adore this story, so keep up the awesome work! I look forward to another chapter someday!
person chesterzerousygirl
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE!I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE! I want MORE!
person ladydoma
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! I started to cry Thank god!!! He didn't die. Seriously dude never scare me like that again!!!!!
person Tazendra
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I can't see how hell is going to get out of this one. If there are no more humans than that's that isn't it? Usually I have some inkling of where a story is going but I honestly don't know with this one. That's a good thing too. I like to be suprised. But I really want to know what happens next now! Also, Daniel is still as cute as ever. I expected that a Hellraiser story with a cute, lovable little boy in it would be silly but some how you make it seem serious. As always, I'll be stalking this place for more updates.
person Tazendra
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, Daniel is so cute! Where do you come up with these ideas for your stories? They are always so neat. Post apocalyptic Hell, this is definately going to be interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens so I hope you update soon.

p.s.
I'll try to be more timely with my reviews in the future. I just realized yesterday that I hadn't left a review for your continuation of To the Victor goes the Spoils. Of course that's fixed now. You can bet you'll see more reviews from me in the future. Ladydoma/ LadyTorte can't have all the fun =P.
person chesterzerousy
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was cool. Update soon!
person Ladydoma
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool man, see pinhead can be sweet when he wants to be. dude you need to email me some time. So what do you think of the sephy fic? Anywho keep this one up, I like it alot!!!
person Ladydoma
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're still alive. I like it!!!! Continue!! Sorry that Tale of two hells seems abandoned. it isn;t but I have not idea in this tiny head of mine. But I am working on a sexyroth...I mean Sephiroth fic. Check it out, look for stories by Ladytorte.