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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hauntingly lovely, please continue.
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this fic. The beginning had me from the first paragraph. I know it's cliche, but dammit,l It's not Fair! Ok., lol, that might have been a bit much, but it fits. I hope to read more soon.
^_^
Neku
^_^
Neku
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo Very ghostlike and alluring. A very well thought out begining. I'l enjoy the rest when it comes.
Hollilia
Hollilia
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Moly, please update this soon! This is really good so far. I agree with what you say, a lot of fanfiction I've read about the Labyrinth never captures the magic and feeling of Sarah and Jareth from the movie, know what I mean. Please do update soon, I will be waiting!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You must continue this! So far it's just beautiful! I love the darker theme that a lot of stories leave out, and how you make Jareth yearn for Sarah, not overpowering her with riddles and whatnot. The atmosphere reminds me a bit of vampire stories and films where the girl can feel its prescence, and maybe even desire it, but never really see the creature itself.
Great work with the prologue! When are you going to add another chapter?
Great work with the prologue! When are you going to add another chapter?
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice prologue.
Poor Jareth. How he suffers for her. :(
The prob is...the more he begs, the more Sarah will...well...not take him seriously.
Its ok and understandable, that he pleads a little. Sarah is touched by this stage.
But if he hopes to win her, he has to fight for her. Be a man about it.
If the roles were reversed, would Sarah look sexy to Jareth, or pathetic?
In love, its cute and desirable to be a little clingy to one's love. But the more one does it, the more the love will get annoyed.
After all, when one is single, one must be happy with themselves. When two people join in love, they happily need each other sometimes, happily be apart sometimes.
In the original Phantom of the Opera, Erik pleaded with Christine...over and over. He was less independent, more dependant. Raoul, her second love, was more independent than dependent. Who did she leave with in the end? Raoul.
I get how u feel that in some stories, Jareth is too independent. He doesnt beg Sarah much. Doesnt show her he cant live without her much.
She is merely a possession.
Yeah, sometimes he can be a jerk about love.
But since he is sometimes independent and shows her that he needs her, he wins her (in most stories).
Im merely offering some stuff about love.
Continue this wonderful story in any way u wish.
Whats most important: Since they both love each other deeply, they should be together.
Poor Jareth. How he suffers for her. :(
The prob is...the more he begs, the more Sarah will...well...not take him seriously.
Its ok and understandable, that he pleads a little. Sarah is touched by this stage.
But if he hopes to win her, he has to fight for her. Be a man about it.
If the roles were reversed, would Sarah look sexy to Jareth, or pathetic?
In love, its cute and desirable to be a little clingy to one's love. But the more one does it, the more the love will get annoyed.
After all, when one is single, one must be happy with themselves. When two people join in love, they happily need each other sometimes, happily be apart sometimes.
In the original Phantom of the Opera, Erik pleaded with Christine...over and over. He was less independent, more dependant. Raoul, her second love, was more independent than dependent. Who did she leave with in the end? Raoul.
I get how u feel that in some stories, Jareth is too independent. He doesnt beg Sarah much. Doesnt show her he cant live without her much.
She is merely a possession.
Yeah, sometimes he can be a jerk about love.
But since he is sometimes independent and shows her that he needs her, he wins her (in most stories).
Im merely offering some stuff about love.
Continue this wonderful story in any way u wish.
Whats most important: Since they both love each other deeply, they should be together.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great prologue...!
I can't wait to read chapter one.
I can't wait to read chapter one.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really good story.
I hope you continue with it.
I hope you continue with it.