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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I'd be great though if you didn't end your moments that you spent so long building up for so soon. Maybe add dialog into them, and elaborate. You have a great story going, just needs a little more umph. You know?
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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The only one! Wonderful. I love it!
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved your fanfiction *.*
Great story!
Great story!
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That´s great! like all of your stories...You´re a fantastic author...
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah - a good ending
I love their verbal spat...
I love their verbal spat...
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bahahahaha that was SWEET! Bitch! Whore! Puny, tiny, etc etc... HAHAHAHHA. i love petty namecalling, it's so much fun!
:D
:D
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
who says smut can't be beautiful? lovely fic.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful ending DP.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're going to leave it at that?!?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! What in the world is he trying to tell her? Update please!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, still enjoying the Miss Swann's version of the Karma Sutra I see...
Idea!! - "The splits" - perhaps one leg extended back touching her shoulder........
or how about at night, on the deck, in the moonlight....oh sorry I'm a bit of a romantic sometimes.....
write on......
Idea!! - "The splits" - perhaps one leg extended back touching her shoulder........
or how about at night, on the deck, in the moonlight....oh sorry I'm a bit of a romantic sometimes.....
write on......