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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
New reader aboard here! Just read your chapter and it was amazingly touching. It made my eyes water when Lizzie couldnt remember who she was, and it hurt so much feeling Jacks grief. Awesome story, cant wait to here the rest
chelsea x
chelsea x
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so wonderful so far, please continue.
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes PLEASE continue! I'm hoping you're able to update quickly. They have to find her and FAST - I just can't bear to see Jack like this!
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Few things, luv, and i only say this cause I care for you.
ONE: change the pictures ro engravings. There were no cameras back then.
TWO: I love angsty Jack, but... he doesn't seem like... Jack.
Keep writing, though!
ONE: change the pictures ro engravings. There were no cameras back then.
TWO: I love angsty Jack, but... he doesn't seem like... Jack.
Keep writing, though!
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was very nice.... Will getting Jack to finally breakdown and let out his grief, at the expense of his own admission to himself that Elizabeth loves Jack, not him, was very touching... I can't wait to see what happens.
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue quickly! I'm so glad Lizzie's not really gone - I can't wait to see what happens next.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh this is much better! I lurves it! Update soon, hon!
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, Jer you talk alot. And your chapters should be bigger.
Oh, word of advice? NEVER post a rant in your A/N. Especially one that BASHES READERS. 'Cause, even I, after reading that, didn't want to read anymore. Maybe you should apologize...
Oh, word of advice? NEVER post a rant in your A/N. Especially one that BASHES READERS. 'Cause, even I, after reading that, didn't want to read anymore. Maybe you should apologize...
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG - so sad! You must update soon - I can't wait to find out what happens. Really good start to the story!
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting.... i am liking it so far.. Hope to see more.