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for A Swann's Sparrow

by Nefaeri

person DesiringPirates
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NICE!
...Your still going down, though. My chapter is at the betas.

But still, great job! Update soon- I want to find out if Lizzie survived!
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO! Don't review! Reviewing is SINNING!
Just kidding.
You BETTER post soon, or I am coming home and kicking your ass. For a minute there, I thought Lizzie was blind, but then I read she was blindFOLDED. You know what I did- I went "Oooohhh!" and smiled.
UPDATE! Or I will kill you... again!
person Wickedswanz
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story has great potential! I can't wait to read more
person Madamx
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Very captivating, please continue soon!