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for What Would You Do? *1*

by Pilgrim

person Kimmie
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was going to wait till the end of what would you do part 2 to review but i just cant keep it in any longer. This is equal first as my favourite story ever!!! I love the character of Oria. Oh i cant wait to see her in a dress lol gonna be funny. Ok im gonna stop here coz i wanna read part 2. see you there!!! YAY
person mar1966
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great action writing! How do you ever figure out who goes where?

Looking forward to What Would You Do 2!
person mar1966
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good speech to the looky-loos who don't review!

By the way, snuggle time with daddy....awwwww!
person mar1966
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why am I the only one reviewing this story?

266 hits and I'm the only one with an opinion???


I love that the happy little family is all together now!! Sweet!

Keep up the good work!
person mar1966
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot and smexy!!!!


This story is going great!!
person mar1966
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving these twists!!

Excellent updates!!

Glad to hear your horse is better.

More please, soon!!
person mar1966
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, ok, I'll let you slide. I know colic in a baby is bad, I can't imagine what it is in a horse!

Nice work adding Oria to the story. Things will get mucky if Jack's attraction for Elizabeth get's between him and Oria!

Can't wait to find out!
person mar1966
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is POTC verbatim...can we get back to Oria??? PLeassseeee!!!
person mar1966
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really curious to see how you work Oria into the Curse of The Black Pearl story.

You've got my rapt attention!

More please!
person mar1966
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jack! How will he ever get that boat from Ana-Maria??

Keep it up!