rate_review Reviews

I really like this story. it has my to favorite things in it. predators and vampires. YEAH!!!!!

Ok, I really like the story,it has alot of potential. It's good but to be honest, you could make it a lot better by simply checking your spelling and grammar more carefully. For example "Mios mother" should be Mio's mother" with an apostrophe. Also you sometimes use the wrong word - eg in chapter three, "aloud in heaven nor hell" Well "aloud" means noisy - the word you need there is "allowed" which means "permitted" Using the wrong word like that will not be picked up by computer spell checkers but they completely change the meaning of what you want to say.

This is super interesting! I can't wait to see where you are taking this story....a half yajuta/human and a vampire? Very unique concept!!

this is something new, and I like it alot. please write more.

HHHMMM, her mystery man returns. I bet her father's new mate had the bad bloods go after her, she sounds like a nasty piece of work, just the kind to do it. Keep going.

Interesting I would not mind reading more

I hope your going to keep going with this, cause it sounds like it could be very interesting.