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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweetness. I can't wait for the next installment.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please repost your story
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Power to the librarians!! =b Very nice- I liked this chapter. I liked the little things you would do when you told from Torac's pov, like how he clicks his mandibles and stuff. (forgive me for not being more specific, I was interrupted in the middle of my reading by an 8 hour sidetrip) And I really liked the ending and the hinting toward future events... =] You rock, weird xenophile girl!! ;b
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! I keep referencing back here, and I was so pleased when I saw it. You have a wonderful writing style, and capture situations wonderfully. (Hm. I seem to be a bit too fond of the word 'wonderful', but I think you'd rather hear than than "totally wicked awesome!"... I think...) I can't wait to read more from you. Please, keep up the wonderful work! You've left me in so much suspense!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoy this story and willbe waiting for you to update without a cliffy in it. lol.
btw ditto what Viewerfinder said
btw ditto what Viewerfinder said
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read more. Love Tor'ac and Mya's interaction with each other. Keep writing this Please
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
again another wonderful chapter. I really hope you keep writing on this story. I am hooked.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey we really do not care about the rating. We love the story!!
BTW What can he do other than one star if you keep erasing his crap. If he gets it down to one oh well . He just keeps giving you hits and himself less weapons. He is off his meds.
BTW What can he do other than one star if you keep erasing his crap. If he gets it down to one oh well . He just keeps giving you hits and himself less weapons. He is off his meds.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating your story for all us eagerly awaiting readers. I was a little worried about you and thought you might not be coming back! I look forward to your next update. I will say it now if I haven't already:
1) I love how you switch their POV's in this story w/o to much overlaping and how it foreshadows instead of revealing most of your plot. You do know how to keep us baited! ^__^
2)Please continue your story I would like to tell you that though I read many I only review to those that I believe have potential and passion. You are a great writer and I hope YOUR Hunter's light burns bright and long in this skill.
~Ja ne! ^.~
1) I love how you switch their POV's in this story w/o to much overlaping and how it foreshadows instead of revealing most of your plot. You do know how to keep us baited! ^__^
2)Please continue your story I would like to tell you that though I read many I only review to those that I believe have potential and passion. You are a great writer and I hope YOUR Hunter's light burns bright and long in this skill.
~Ja ne! ^.~
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I love how things don't move too fast or too slow...and how you can create such believable fiction. I love your characters and the realistic dialogue between Tor and Mya. You're very talented. I wish you wrote more stories.. well you should, sometime. :)
I think you should have a male introduced into the story, a friend of Mya's or something like that but not a very important character...so we can how Tor'ac would react to a male and if he would get jealous?
Just a suggestion. Man I can't wait to see what Tor has up his sleeve...er...armour sleeve.
You're doing absolutely fantastic!
-Cara
I think you should have a male introduced into the story, a friend of Mya's or something like that but not a very important character...so we can how Tor'ac would react to a male and if he would get jealous?
Just a suggestion. Man I can't wait to see what Tor has up his sleeve...er...armour sleeve.
You're doing absolutely fantastic!
-Cara