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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great. You did some awesome improvement in To'rac's POV (sorry if i spelled his name wrong). I can't wait for the next chapter and to see what will happen between him and Mya. Thanks for sharing your imagination.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. I could just imagine To'rac sitting there, the cat curled up in his lap. The perfect chair. I'll have a Yautja recliner please salesperson.
I thought the test was excellent. It'll be interesting to see what happened in Mya's past. You must keep goin, but make sure it's at your pace.
I thought the test was excellent. It'll be interesting to see what happened in Mya's past. You must keep goin, but make sure it's at your pace.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I thought this was serious before...but I think I know what you mean.
Interesting that Tor'ac would test her. And how brave of Mya! I'm glad he's impressed with her. I would loveee to see a yautja with a kitty haha. Awwh. :)
As long as you continue to write more amazing chapters I have no problem waiting for the next update. *is lying a little bit* OK ok. It's such a good story though!
Things move at a nice pace. I like it. But you prolly already figured that out heh.
Take care and good writing
-Cara
Interesting that Tor'ac would test her. And how brave of Mya! I'm glad he's impressed with her. I would loveee to see a yautja with a kitty haha. Awwh. :)
As long as you continue to write more amazing chapters I have no problem waiting for the next update. *is lying a little bit* OK ok. It's such a good story though!
Things move at a nice pace. I like it. But you prolly already figured that out heh.
Take care and good writing
-Cara
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the first three chapters, especially no. #3.
I'm glad she passed his test, she has shown him that she trusts him - very important !!!!!
Looking forward to future updates......
I'm glad she passed his test, she has shown him that she trusts him - very important !!!!!
Looking forward to future updates......
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what's wrong with u? u can't just fucking leave it there! are u doing this on purpose!? anyway, fucking cool story. plz continue! TT_TT
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awesome, I can't to see what happens next. One thing though, Tor'ac seems a little too human, especaially when you did his pov. But you are the writer and I'm not so do what what you want. I love your fic, keep it up.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love that he thinks her lips are weird! ;b A most entertaining chapter.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Continue...
This...intrigues me...
very...very...much...
Ooman...
(>_<)
This...intrigues me...
very...very...much...
Ooman...
(>_<)
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
still going great. I'm glad you put his piont of view in that always makes the story more intresting. At least to me anyways