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Very good update. I'd love to hear more from Tor'ac's POV. Keep up the good work.

I realy like your story and i'm very interested to see how things will develope. Thank you for updating so quickly. I loved reading things from Tor'ak(sp?)s POV it was very interesting. I hope you update soon and continue w/the great work.

Ja ne! ^.~

Oh really interesting Torac's POV. I wasn't expecting that.
Will we get to find out what Torac's mission was on Earth?
Keep writing this, you've really got a great plot going.

Interesting, and funny with the pet cat. :)

Given this is an adultsite, here's an idea. Imagine if Mya walked in on To'rac enjoying himself? Something he smelled triggered that part of him and well given he isn't human he won't care if they see him.

this is fun! let him have a couple days to recover and explore before the others show up if you want. sounds like an interestin' story

I am realy liking this story and cant wait for another chapter. It is realy good so far. I like how you think things out and explain them so clearly. When Tor'ac is talking. Such as his oppinon on the fruit. Tis so cool. I second the oppinon of having it be like harry and the hendersons. Twould be soo cute. Hes trying to figure stuff out and such. Oh and another funny thought is to have Mya snore and Tor'ac hears it. He goes to find out what it is. I have a few ideas. If you would like to contact me my AIM is wolfthesnake@aol.com. Hope to hear from you. I realy do enjoy your story and how it is not so much smut filled in the first chapters. That is a awsome thing in my oppinon. I can see it like twoards the middel and ends of storys or atleast hell after the first chap. It just always seems soooo unrealistic when they are like screwing in the first damn paragraph.
well yours truly.
a fan
scarlett.

Keep up the good work. I will be waiting for more! :)

Aww! That was adorable! I love this fic so much and I can't wait for more! So be quick! I have to know whats going on with him and the clan ship! What is he there to do? What is he going to do with the other girl watching him? OR THE CAT? Please be fast... I need to know what happenes.
E.M.

this story is great so far. i think he should spend a little more time w/mya before his friends should show up.

ja ne! ^.~

Hmm, Mya and Tor'ac together sounds nice. It'd be nice showing them alone getting to know each other as friends and more so as they form a close relationship. I'd liken the situation to the movie Harry and the Hendersons. :) It'd be funny if the poor Yajuta had a few problems living in a human's home. Such as getting hyper on coffee or by accident walking in on Mya in the shower.