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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far. It's well written. I really hope you continue it soon. Oh, and I would like to see his fellow predators jion in on the fun soon. But in the end that's all up to you and how the story goes.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he should spend more time with Mya, defintly !!!
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he should spend more time with Mya, defintly !!!
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far its wonderful. I personaly think that he should spend a bit more time with her. Its a good storry i would let it flow longer than just a few chaps. It would be very interesting to read.
If you wish to speak i am on aim as wolfthesnake@aol.com.
Hope to read more of this soon.
Yours truly
scarlett
If you wish to speak i am on aim as wolfthesnake@aol.com.
Hope to read more of this soon.
Yours truly
scarlett
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great - well written and exciting, a pleasure to read. I'd like to see you keep up some action and a bit of suspense, keep us guessing a bit. If it were up to me I would have those men follow Mya home somehow and cause seom trouble... Whatever you decide, please don't keep us waiting too long, I really want to read more of this.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! What an amazing story!!!! And, I'm so glad you are not like other authors who have their characters screwing each other in the first chapter, b/c.... THAT IS SO UNREALISTIC!!!!!!!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehehehehe!!! But you've already heard all that...
Me like very much. ;b It's hilarious, though I suppose it helps some that I can almost see some of the places you talk about. Oh, and I give Leah my stamp of approval. Continue!!
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Me like very much. ;b It's hilarious, though I suppose it helps some that I can almost see some of the places you talk about. Oh, and I give Leah my stamp of approval. Continue!!
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really cool i hope you update soon. i think he should spend more time with Mya get to know her more but thats up to you.
please dont keep you reads waiting to long
please dont keep you reads waiting to long
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it I think he should spend sometime with Mya you know screw stuff up. Please update soon.
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I like the eat more fibre line. I could imagine it sounding that way.
I think Tor'ac should spend some more time with Mya before his fellow Yautja arrive. Maybe have the four men return or get close to finding him.
It's up to you but please keep going.
I think Tor'ac should spend some more time with Mya before his fellow Yautja arrive. Maybe have the four men return or get close to finding him.
It's up to you but please keep going.