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schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a yummy shower scene! Loved it, as always! Thanks so much for writing.
person jectex57
schedule December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully interesting story. Please keep me updated.
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Predator fanfics I've read! *adds to favorites/bookmarks it/etc* ^_^
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your story Muse. Intriguing plot, and extremely well written. Looking forward to what will happen next.
person Emily
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey I know you haven't updated this story in a while and I'm kind of late jumping on the bandwagon, but I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. Even if you never finish it I think it ends on a promising note. :) I'm even totally okay with the lack of smut which is saying a lot for me, lol. :-P I totally loved it and just wanted you to know. Good job!
Thanks for an enjoyable read. :)
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story made the hidden little squealing fan-type creature die in rapture. I love your depth with the characters, the writing style that you use, and the little quirks you have tossed in all while using tons of Yautja lore. Wonderful. Usually, I have a difficult time reading Yautja/random human stories because I am so set on the pairing of Scar and Lex, but yours is addicting and unique and unlike those other stories, focuses more on the plot and their actual relationship instead of just the sex. Thank you so much for sharing your story and I look forward to reading more in the future. <3
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaah! You aren't allowed to stop there, you realize! lol You're just getting to the good part! Awesome so far! KEEP GOING!!!
person shortest_warrior
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love La'rn already, Musey. Now, I know I'll have to wait and find out, but . . . I wonder will Mr "not so nice pred" have much to say at late repast and at the claiming ceremony? Maybe Ga'av will tie his mandibles up so he can't talk, XD.

Looking forward to reading the next chappie, and the one after that, and the one after that, and . . . . lol.

Hope poor Ka'jai is not made sit in the cell for too long.
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapter. I started to read this story a while ago and have been waiting for you to update ever since. I really enjoy this story and all of its characters. Can't wait for the next chapter to come.
person Mandy
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! please write more. I beg of you