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person Death_Angel
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. I didn't know reviews were allow on here. It's the first time I'm seeing this review button. Ack, this site is hard to work with since it's not in order and stuff. Hopefullu this will go through. I love the story! Never read this type of story and it's got me sooooo interested. I hope to see this update soon!
person Death_Angel
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention this but I love how the story flows smoothly. Because most fics that I've read all rush just to get to the "intimate" part and I just find that annoying and unrealistic. After all, it takes time for relationships to build between people, especially those that are truly love with each other.So awesome job on that!
person Death_Angel
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeeee chapter!
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update again soon!
person cyrosian
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I'm enjoying it more than most. I'm looking forward to more chapters, considering that it may take a little while for you to add new ones. So I will wait patiently, and bide my time, until you can write more. The story is developing well, the use of multi pov is amazing, and the characters are both inspiring and realistic.

Cycho
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Argh. I've been completely remiss in not reviewing this one lately Muse. I hope you can forgive me :(

I love this story, it has such a warm feeling to it. Not to say it's sappy or anything crude like that. No, it's something that you read when you want to enjoy yourself and not have your emotions played with too much. Now don't get me wrong, I love all kinds of stories, and I'm saying that every story has its own feel, and you do a great job with this one.

It is great reading through the different POV's of both Tor'ac and Meeya. It adds a different dimension to most other stories which only show a single point of view, or an all-encompassing POV.

I hope you will be able to continue with this soon. You know I'll keep bugging you if you don't :D
person Vyper
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I really liked this one.
person grimmster
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Another chapter :D Thank you sooo so much! Now I'm eagerly awaiting the next. I've read this quite a while ago, and had been very much awaiting the next chapter(s), and while I haven't reviewed til now (forgetful T__T), I have to say... I love your characters, story, and it's one of the most well worked out Predator fics I've ever read. Do keep it up!

Cheers, and awaiting the next one :P

~the seph
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! I like it when the predators talk more, that way it seems more like a more realistic relashionship with them and the oomans. Please keep writing. I gotta kno what happens!
person anna
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg,i LOVE this story.when are you going to post the next xhapter?you HAVE to email me and tell me when,i neeeeeed to know *.*