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Have I reviewed this before? I can't remember. I started reading it at least a year ago and wandered away and lost the site. I am THRILLED that you're updating, and look forward to reading more.

This is the Predator story I've always wanted. I'm aware that there are Predator novels, but it's interesting to see Yautja culture as interpreted through one individual living in it. It's more interesting to see human culture that way, too: Mya's answer as to what "wife" means is not the one I would have given, but gives a lot of insight into her character. And she and Tor'ac are both characters I like: I look forward to seeing them interact more and to seeing what becomes of them individually.

Thanks for writing. I'm all a-squee about it.

BRAVO MY LITTLE ONE. I think this is the best chapter yet. And it was something nice to read after moving into the new house. Please continue when you can. This is a story that gets you hooked from the very first chapter.

Ar'Shiya
The Death Warrior

As always Muse, your writing never ceases to amaze me. And of course, it is extra special being the one year anniversery from when you first started writing the story. Plus, the fact that its an update to this site that's gotten so depressingly empty after a whole month, is also quite special.

So now you have a whole new area to write about with Meeya leaving with Tor'ac. I can't wait to see where you will be taking things from here on out. :)

Yay you updated! i felt kinda silly checking this section twice a day for the last two months, but I love your story. I was kinda hoping that Cassie and/or Leah would get their freak on with one of To'Rac's hunting buddies, but *sigh* oh well. I'm so glad Mya's going with him and that he chose her to be his mate. Yay!

yay!!! his mate? wow...keep it up...cant wait for more

Wootness. And here's how that scene at the end REALLy went...

Leah: get going to the final frontier or something like that...
Mya: Yeah, I don't really do Star Trek.
Cassie: Isn't that the one with Spock's slightly evil brother?
Leah: I meant as in Space... And he wasn't evil, per se, just crazy.
Cassie: Well, in his case there wasn't much of a difference.
Leah: Hey Tor'ac, you ever met a Vulcan?
Tor'ac: ...
Mya: Yeah, we've gotta go. Places to go, people to meet, stuff to... do... See ya.
[climb onto space ship]

(This has been a presentation of One Minute Theater, a division of S.P.I.R.)
Hope you enjoyed the show! I know I did.
;b

PHEW!!! I'm glad Mya passed the first many tests I'm sure she'll have. I like the sound of High Arbitrator Ga'av already.

Oh I'm glad Mya's going with Tor'ac and that she agreed to be his mate. I had to laugh at the reactions of Leah and Cassie. I'd hate to be in Tor'ac's sandals if he accidently hurt her. They seem to be the type of friends that would say. "If you hurt her we'll find a way to search the galaxy and beat your ass."

I wonder what Sir 'not so nice pred' is going to do when Mya finally gets to the ship? Will he cause Mya and Torac trouble? How will the rest of the ship react? Will Ka'jai get a fair trial? ARGHHHH, Not Shorty and more questions. LOL..

OH! I do have one more. Do they need any extras on board to clean their weapons????

I get to be #100.

Hun, you are awesome. I love that she gets to go with Tor'ac. Steamy scenes interspersed with the occasional challenge coming up I hope.

Keep going, and put that damn muse on a leash this time so it can't run off.

Yay, you updated (God I'm slow)! Chapter eight was amazing, as usual! ^_^
I've been so preoccupied with what life's been dealing me that just a few hours ago I decided to see if anyone had updated.
But now I'm done... ;_; Lol! I'll have to ponder what happens next until you update again!
... I need to update mine as well... but writer's block... omigawd! It drives me crazy.
Great chapter darling, I loved it! Keep up the good work! ^_^

Please continue this. i love it, and when i first started reading i didnt know what to expect. i hope to see more