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schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man this is really really good. I can't wait for the next update. Your writing is very smooth and a pleasure to read. I got lost in the story line, and didn't notice how the time flew by. I wish you luck on any future writing you will do.
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, for some reason I've neglected this story. What a mistake that was, this is very good. The characters are believable in their own way, and the interactions between Tor'ac Meeya and her roomates are extremely well written.

I'll be watching this one for sure from now on. :)
person Nanook
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderfully written! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! More please! :D :D :D :D :D
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, I read the first couple chapters a few months back... good to see it still posted to, and I hope to see more chapters coming up. I'm all for Pred-style Ass-kicking. :D
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! A bit of a cliff hanger. I can't wait to read the next chapter. You always make the story so interesting and fun to read. Please update soon.
person Zellezra
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Squee!! I suspected that it might not have been Tor'ac when she was saved, but when I read that it truly wasn't him I couldn't help but squeal like a little school girl! XD This chapter was great! I was downing my eminems while reading this the same way I downed my popcorn at opening night of 300. As always, you did an amazing job!
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Another chapter!! I really like this story so I really hope you keep it up. So who's the new Pred! Is it good lookin's brother!! Heheh! Well just wanted to shout out my love!

love
wolfie!
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... omg... i'm in love... i soooooo can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! XD *huggles and snuggles*
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Little one this story just keeps getting better and better, and I liked the way his brother showed up. This story is a keeper, so keep on writing little. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Ar'Shiya
the ancient warrior.............
person Keen
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*rubs hands together* I think I know who this stranger is....

In the words of Busta Rhymes: GIMMIE SUM MO'