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schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DUDE, THAT WAS SO TOTALLY THE SHIZ!!!!! And, like totally, you need to update soon.
...I was going to do something cute (translation= spastic, and intended to make you laugh) in this review, but I don't remember what it was... So, I'm just gonna abduct Gaav, go find Xellos and beat him to death. Ciao. ;b
~President and Founder of the Society for the Promotion of Interspecies Romance~
person JulieL
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, mysterious new guy. Or maybe not. I wonder if it could be Ka'jai? What will Tor'ac if it is? What? What? Man, I can't wait to find out. So many questions.

Great Chappie by the way.
person JulieL
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I can't construct a sentence. What will Tor'ac if it is? Should read. What will Tor'ac do if it is?

Looking forward to the next chappie.
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, damn, damn.

OK, you can not have another month and half long hiatus. You must update soon. I gots a feeling who it is, but I need to know what Mya is going to do.

Please, my Muse, update soon.
person Zellezra
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this chapter was great! ^_^ But oh, another cliff hanger, hehe. Now I'm wondering if this is the last they'll see of each other. ;_; Wonderful work, dear, can't wait to read more!!
person Keen
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Leaving? I think not. He better keep his ass right there.

On a non-belligerent note: You are so good at conveying emotions. It was well worth the wait!
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this was the best chapter ever girl. I can't wait to read more, so please update soon.
person JulieL
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn them other Yautja. *Kneels down praying*, "Please don't spear me big guys."

Just when Mya and Tor'ac start to get used to each other company arrives. I hope Tor'ac doesn't leave too soon. Please let him stay Muse, please.
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go To'rac!!!! Kick some ass.

Please don't let him leave her behind just as she is opening up to him. Please.
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot!! Your quarter was AWESOME. ;b