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YES! You updated!! :)
I'm so glad Tor'ac came in time to save Mya. I wonder who's hunting down Tor, and who are those two yautja, and what was his mission, and is he really leaving?? Questions, questions lol.
He better not be leaving, not with their relationship developing into possibly...love? Oh boy.
Great chapter. Loved the action scene and the mushy scene between Tor and Mya. Things definitely got more emotional.
And a big thanks to the guys who did all that update prodding! :)

So, by the way totally awesome with the foreshadowing and all that rot. And I am most thankful that I am knowledgeable about certain things, and such knowledge has given me the ability to not freak out at certain literary elements known to the general populace as "plot developments" or, possibly, when employed at the end of the device know as the "chapter," as "cliffhangers." Either it's that, or it's that Cassia and Sio broke me of freaking-out-ness long ago (if you haven't read them, remind me to introduce you) with several, quite literal, cliffhangers. Oh and awesome scones by the way. I know you didn't make them, but you supervised, which is almost as good. ;b And on that day, the raspberry shall rule the world, and Terrence Mann shall be elevated to his proper place above all other men, and those who are lesser shall be silenced. Oh and pretty good job with Mya's parents. I totally didn't think you were going to bring that up so soon (I don't know why I thought that) but you handled that really believably. ...I'm not entirely sure what that means, but I'm sure you do because other people seem to understand what comes out of my mouth (or fingers) better than I do. ...You know I'm totally just rambling now, right? And if this isn't the longest review you've ever received, I'll... well, I'll eat another scone! (Ha, this'll show you to complain to me about something.) So, let you-know-who keep talking in your head and keep the story coming. And rock on crazy xenophile girl!! Rock on!!!

......And now that everyone is thoroughly convinced of the imperative need to promptly lock me in a padded room, I will be leaving. o.O Ja ne.

yeah i liked it...is this the end? i hope not...maybe she will go with him or something...keep it up, i love it

I'd been scouring the internet for a good Predator fic, and I've finally found one! This story is so wonderful! I love the way you've portrayed the characters and your choice in words, everything keeps me enthralled! I really do hope you add more soon, I'm going insane wondering what will happen next! Make sure you finish your work, BUT GET CRACKING ON THE NEXT CHAPTER! XD Thank you so much for writing. ^_^

This chapter was awesome. Your writing has improved and I love it. I can't wait to find out what happens so please update soon.

Okay, sometimes I'm slow. I just realized I've been talking to you elsewhere and you were writing this fic I like here. Hadn't made the connection. I thought the premise was kind of loony when I started to read it, but it actually hangs together very well, and the relationship between Tor'ac and Mya has unfolded slowly and seems believable. I just hope Tor'ac shows up to save the day soon!

keep it up, i like this story

You have been just WAITING to try and kill someone with that thing haven't you?? [sigh] ;b Gasp! What's going to happen next?! Oh come on... Tor'ac's just gotta save her! =]

I just liked reading it again so much I had to tell you. Still excellent.

-Cam

Pheonixhiss otherwise known as Scarlett here. Just wanted to tell ya to keep up the good work and that i love the new chapter and think its awsome the direction your taking the story atleast. I can't wait to read mroe on it.
Well seeya in my next review for the story hopefully it will be soon ^__^