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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! i really like the way this was written, especially the dialogue. it felt like the Quentin Terantino (sp?) of fics.
there was some verb tense mix ups and sometimes the sentences were confusing, but i would gladly beta for you to help fix those little things!
there was some verb tense mix ups and sometimes the sentences were confusing, but i would gladly beta for you to help fix those little things!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should continue! Very nicely done, I look forward to more if you plan to continue. Keep it up.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good, are you going to write a second chapter? I would like to read it then^_^