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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I hope you get to writing more of it later. I just found it and I think you are wonderful. You are doing terrific so please keep up the good work.
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really love it. please write more soon.
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love it!!!!!!! Can you email me the next time a chapter comes out?
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Five stars to you. I love your story. Sam/Marko and David/Michael are my favorite pairing. I wish you could update more. If you ever need a beta or something feel free to give me a shout. I'm always willing to help others. Keep up the good work!!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job this keeps getting better and better please update soon
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's alright you are forgiven. poor paul, poor marco, poor sam, and alan i hope they are alright.
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! OMG!!! You had me gripping the edge of my seat, and scrolling down on the computer with the other!! Oh, the HORROR!!! And, poor PAUL!!!!!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
killer cliffhanger! I love it! Oh the possibilities, oh the character development!
I'm feeling all right...I'm not in as much pain as I was, though I go back to the doctor for a checkup tomorrow. I get allergies in my ears at times, and every few years I get an infection or two. They just like to be dumb, sigh, and it drives me crazy. But thanks for your well wishes and concern!
I totally agree with your note at the end. I'm not as keen on writing slash as I am reading...though I've done it in the past and have a piece in the works..I don't think that's a genre I'm particularly good at. But I agree that the vamps would most likely go both ways...and I know exactly what you're talking about on the commentary...that group in high school that you'd give anything to be a part of, but they just walk right by you. I went with that angle on free falling, as well, and it's served me very well. I've also noticed that it seems like lost boys fanfic seems to go in cycles...you get huge surges of het fic followed by a backlash of slash followed by another backlash of het...it goes on and on and on. I really don't mind either if they're written well and have a good plot, which yours does!
though I wouldn't complain at a threesome or a triangle tossed about here and there, heh heh.
anyway, keep up the good work! I'm sure this story will be finished before free falling, at any rate LOL
I'm feeling all right...I'm not in as much pain as I was, though I go back to the doctor for a checkup tomorrow. I get allergies in my ears at times, and every few years I get an infection or two. They just like to be dumb, sigh, and it drives me crazy. But thanks for your well wishes and concern!
I totally agree with your note at the end. I'm not as keen on writing slash as I am reading...though I've done it in the past and have a piece in the works..I don't think that's a genre I'm particularly good at. But I agree that the vamps would most likely go both ways...and I know exactly what you're talking about on the commentary...that group in high school that you'd give anything to be a part of, but they just walk right by you. I went with that angle on free falling, as well, and it's served me very well. I've also noticed that it seems like lost boys fanfic seems to go in cycles...you get huge surges of het fic followed by a backlash of slash followed by another backlash of het...it goes on and on and on. I really don't mind either if they're written well and have a good plot, which yours does!
though I wouldn't complain at a threesome or a triangle tossed about here and there, heh heh.
anyway, keep up the good work! I'm sure this story will be finished before free falling, at any rate LOL
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love part seven. Am sick with an ear infection so this made life so much better tonight!
Oh alright, I won't be jealous...I suppose I have to write on mine again sometime, ;)
Love your interactions between Paul and young allen. Too cute, and it really helps to shape both personalities. I love what you do with allen and sam, usually I can't deal with them but you actually make me care about their characters.
I totally agree with your note at the end (I was totally startled at first because there wasn't an author's note at the beginning, LOL). I think there's instant attraction, but that doesn't necessarily equal love or a lasting love. And it doesn't make for an interesting story...to me it's a plotline copout, so I definitely love all of the things you're putting the characters through while they're getting used to each other. It makes them that much more believable.
Glad you liked 'I'll take the bad ones' - I nearly pulled that story more than once because I just wasn't sure how people took to it...I don't know why I wrote that, probably for the challenge aspect...but yeah, Paul's definitely my favorite, though dwayne gives him a run for his money these days. I think Paul's character is probably the devil on my shoulder when I'm writing fanfic, lol. But I love how you've developed his personality and can't wait to see what you do next! Keep up the great work!
Oh alright, I won't be jealous...I suppose I have to write on mine again sometime, ;)
Love your interactions between Paul and young allen. Too cute, and it really helps to shape both personalities. I love what you do with allen and sam, usually I can't deal with them but you actually make me care about their characters.
I totally agree with your note at the end (I was totally startled at first because there wasn't an author's note at the beginning, LOL). I think there's instant attraction, but that doesn't necessarily equal love or a lasting love. And it doesn't make for an interesting story...to me it's a plotline copout, so I definitely love all of the things you're putting the characters through while they're getting used to each other. It makes them that much more believable.
Glad you liked 'I'll take the bad ones' - I nearly pulled that story more than once because I just wasn't sure how people took to it...I don't know why I wrote that, probably for the challenge aspect...but yeah, Paul's definitely my favorite, though dwayne gives him a run for his money these days. I think Paul's character is probably the devil on my shoulder when I'm writing fanfic, lol. But I love how you've developed his personality and can't wait to see what you do next! Keep up the great work!
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::Jumps up and down:: YAYYYYY!!! Another brilliant chapter!!!! Woot woot!!! Woot woot!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!! Thank GOD, You don;t believe in love at first sight, that shit makes me sick!!!!!!!! Love ya, toodles and poodles!!!!