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loved parts five and six. just got home from working a late night, so it was great to have those to come home to! I love your interpretation of paul...you've got a great sensitivity about him, a great vulnerability which I absolutely love and envy. Also love your marko...you make him a great fine line between conniving and empathetic, and it works so well. Your explanations of everything are also very well thought out - I always love stories that make the situations more plausible than some brush-off explanation. And how I envy your Allen! I've never really written the Frog brothers because they've not really interested me and I never felt that I could actually do a good job of them, or Sam. But you do a fabulous job of turning them into intricate personalities. Oh I'm so jealous!

epic? oh I hear you. Believe me I hear you. I remember when I thought free falling was going to be twenty chapters, tops, maybe, if I pushed it. Here I am a year and nearly fifty chapters later, heh. I have to say, it delights me that there will be plenty more to read though, and that it's fun for you to write! Though no matter what, don't let people pressure you into trying to always put out more if you don't feel ready to do so. You have such a wonderful plot going, don't feel the need to compromise it for speed. Write at your own pace, and I'll at least keep coming back to see how everything turns out!

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I really liked what you have written so far please continue to write!

OH NO! more please it is important that there is more to read.

Definitely AN EPIC!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

part three was excellent...love what you're doing with sam, and how you're expanding marco's character.

I like your thoughts on the origins of the boys in part four, too. you definitely put a lot of thought into it. can't wait to see more!

Once again I bow down to you and your talents!!!! I just love this STORY!! I don't know how many times i can say it!!!!! The personal struggles are the best! And, i think it's really cool how you explained the past of the Lost Boys!!!!!!!!!

YAYYYYYY!!!!! You updated!! It felt as if I was waiting forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved the chapter!!!!!

LOL!!! Poor Sam and Marko. Ahhhh, the frustration I love it!!!! Seriously, awesome story, and I love your writing style!

WOW! WHATA N AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!

this is really awesome. and for someone who has english as a second language, this is really really really awesome. please please please continue!!!!