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October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Here's how I see it: considering the way this is written, you can afford a lot more confidence than that.
Your style is good and the story is nicely original. You had a difficult plot but you definitely managed to pull it off!
1. You need a beta. There are still some small spelling mistakes in there and it's always a good thing to get things double checked.
2. Take out the author's note. Don't break up a story like that!! You can put AN's in the beginning or end of a chapter, but if you post them as a single chapter, it's always gonna disturb the readers. Especially since what you wrote is outdated now, anyway.
3. Few people read a story if they don't know what to expect at all. Be nice, give us a title and a little summary. It doesn't have to be good - just truthful.
4. Come on, give yourself some credit. You suck at titles? Other people suck at writing! :) We all suck at something, but giving away your weakness like that is the worst thing you can do. Who's gonna read a story if the author says it's shit? Just give the damn thing a title and let the readers choose if it sucks.
Your style is good and the story is nicely original. You had a difficult plot but you definitely managed to pull it off!
1. You need a beta. There are still some small spelling mistakes in there and it's always a good thing to get things double checked.
2. Take out the author's note. Don't break up a story like that!! You can put AN's in the beginning or end of a chapter, but if you post them as a single chapter, it's always gonna disturb the readers. Especially since what you wrote is outdated now, anyway.
3. Few people read a story if they don't know what to expect at all. Be nice, give us a title and a little summary. It doesn't have to be good - just truthful.
4. Come on, give yourself some credit. You suck at titles? Other people suck at writing! :) We all suck at something, but giving away your weakness like that is the worst thing you can do. Who's gonna read a story if the author says it's shit? Just give the damn thing a title and let the readers choose if it sucks.
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the only Marty/Doc fic I've found and you must finish it! Its such a disapointment when I find wonderful, rare pairings and the author isn't good at all, but you're incredible! Please, I beg of you, you must go on! I check back all the time and re-read the two finished chapters, waiting for the day you're muse will grant my wishes.
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!! This is like the sweetest thing ever X3 I've never actually thought of DocxMarty but as soon as I read this fic I wanted more! XD
So please please please finish it soon =3 I really want to know how it ends and it feels like the good stuff has only begun!! X3
I do hope you update it soon =3 Thanks for a great fic!
So please please please finish it soon =3 I really want to know how it ends and it feels like the good stuff has only begun!! X3
I do hope you update it soon =3 Thanks for a great fic!
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um...wow.
Seriously. Wow.
I hope you update this soon! It's really...
...nice.
Seriously. Wow.
I hope you update this soon! It's really...
...nice.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Come on! You've got to finish this!
This is the first Doc/Marty story I have ever read and it's good! Very Good.
At first I thought that it might be weird but you did it really well.
Please continue!
This is the first Doc/Marty story I have ever read and it's good! Very Good.
At first I thought that it might be weird but you did it really well.
Please continue!
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The only Doc/Marty fic I've ever found and I LOVE ITTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please tell me that you're not stopping this, because that would suck very badly. *nods head up and down* You write very well and I hope the rest of the lemon is as deliocounes as the rest of it already it!
~Alessan Rache
~Alessan Rache