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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was short and sweet. Nice, but I think I like your other stuff a lot more.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh thank you for the clear up. i didn't know she was 20, it's because keira at the time was about 16 so i thought she was. oops. i guess that makes it better....
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're welcome for "the clear up" (cute phrasing, by the way).
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this idea! Keep going :)
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this is great so far, but whats bothering me greatly is...well elizabeth swann is currently 16 right,,,and 4 years ago she lost her virginity...that makes her 12!!! but anyways.....it's a good story though....
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This for "a damsel". In this fic Lizzie is currently 20 years old. She lost her virginity to Jack at 16, and 4 years have passed since that event. I just thought that I would eliminate your confusion on this topic. As for the author, this fic is excellent, but you rushed the ending. I was expecting a couple of more chapters rather than the Epilogue. Oh, well. It's good either way.