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for A New Alliance

by Kehlan

person myst
schedule November 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This was very satisfying on so many levels! Great matches, justice, drama, comic relief, great story! Loved it and sorry to see it end. I hope to see the wonderful George again, and his sons. And of course, Kehlan. Congrats on a story well done!

person myst
schedule November 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

you may never see my reviews, but bravo. bravo.

person Howdy
schedule March 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAaaaaaa! So excited to see that 1) you continued writing this and 2) you found a clever way to give Price the "what for". Cause seriously, fuck that guy. He 'gon learn today. Lol Thank you so much for sticking with it and updating! :D
person Howdy
schedule January 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Admittedly, I have to refresh my memory and reread some chapters... But I'm still reading, and still interested in where you're going with the story. I check for updates pretty often and I really enjoy your work. Don't be discouraged! :D
person Kapowallace
schedule May 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! An update! I had been checking back and consoling myself that you said before that you would not abandon this story so I wouldn't think that's what happened! I completely understand, that pesky life getting in the way of more entertaining pursuits. I'm still loving the story, and I agree that the scene with Kiryende killing that officer bugs me too, but I really don't see another way that that could have gone down. You're right: diplomatic immunity, what could they do? I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
person Brandy
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
No need to apologize. Don't want to ruin it for everyone else. :) As always, it was a wonderfully written chapter. I do hope that there will be more stories with these characters. I've grown quite attached to them.
person Kopper
schedule October 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing! I am slightly ashamed that it has taken me so long to review (been following since about Ch. 40).

The way that you weave all of the cultures and characters together sends shivers down my spine, you do it so well. Thank you so very much for sharing your work.
person Kapowallace
schedule October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I love how you wrote it as she was remembering it in the shower. It was very well done. I ended up reading this chapter twice because I liked it so much! Looking forward to more!
person Kapowallace
schedule September 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! So excited for an update! It's cruel to leave us hanging with Khetara and Kiryende, but I'm sure you know by now we're not going anywhere till the story's done! I am enjoying the depth you have to each of your characters, and leaving the choice on what to do in Kehlan's hands with that vague order! I can't wait to see what she does and to get back to Khetara and Kiryende. So excited! Keep it up, you're writing skills are amazing and I am greatly enjoying this story!
person Kapowallace
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Things are getting even more intriguing! I was a little worried that you had stopped updating this story, but I kept checking back and now I'm so glad I did! I can't wait for the next chapter! (But I will, patiently!) :)