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August 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The story is almost done?? I hope that the sequel is just as good as this one. Keep up the amazing work.
On a side note,thank you for not killing off George. I was really sad there for a minute.
On a side note,thank you for not killing off George. I was really sad there for a minute.
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July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm simultaneously glad you have a plan worked out for how to wrap this story up and sad that it will be coming to an end. I have greatly enjoyed all of your updates, and I have to say that I wouldn't be too upset if your characters dragged this story out a good bit longer. ^_^
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July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yep, worth the wait! I'm glad to see they came through that mission with George still alive! I can't wait to find out more about this Jonathan Price business. It's very mysterious! Keep it up!
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July 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love that Centanu called him George like that! Thanks for the heads up about how long it may be before the next chapter. Take your time, it's worth the wait! I'm (patiently) looking forward to the next chapter. Stay motivated, it'll come to you!
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July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
No problem, just giving credit where it's due. This story has so many twists and turns, just when I think I know where it's going, everything changes! It's a very exciting read and I love how in depth you've gone with your characters and all the details in the story from both the Predator franchise and Star Trek. It's very easy to become immersed in this story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this fic! You have a lot of talent and it shows you've been working hard on this. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The fight scenes are very well done, just so you know.
That last twist in the most recent chapter is definitely an eye-opener. I actually ended up almost spitting out my drink with a "whaaaaa?!?!?!" Keep up the hard work!!!
That last twist in the most recent chapter is definitely an eye-opener. I actually ended up almost spitting out my drink with a "whaaaaa?!?!?!" Keep up the hard work!!!
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May 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work! The suspense is killing me, but I like it. :)
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May 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Woo! I got a 4 chapter update this time around :)
I like how you're drawing out them starting the hunt, and also giving insight to the Queen's thoughts. Keep up the good work!
also, beware the terrifying knitting!!! lol (I thought that was the best joke ^_^)
I like how you're drawing out them starting the hunt, and also giving insight to the Queen's thoughts. Keep up the good work!
also, beware the terrifying knitting!!! lol (I thought that was the best joke ^_^)
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April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've been quite an avid follower of this story since about chapter...well, it was in the teens I think when I first started to read. Like many on this site, I'm a shadow on the wall. I read when I have time and rarely leave a comment. That really should change. I was absent for a month or so and thus had a lot of reading to catch up on. Being back in college also cuts into my recreational relaxation time. I saw what happened and I can't tell you how glad I am that you are continuing this story. Having tried my hand at writing as well, I know how frustrating it is to have AFF.net decree something as it has happened with a couple of my stories as well when there was no problem with non-story related intros a few years ago. That along with lack of any interest expressed in reviews has caused several of my stories to just die off. Without feedback, the spark of creativity just dies. So, my apologies in being remiss and doing as everyone else has done.
I love this story. While I'm not a huge hang-on follower of Predator, I have taken interest in them through the past years enough to have a pretty decent grasp on their culture and whatnot. And I can tell you this from what I have learned and what I have read in other fanfictions: people who say your yautja are too soft? They've only watched the movies. People who say your yautja are bullies? Never read the lore or comics around them. People who say they're not cannon? Elitists--better off ignored and deleted. You can never satisfy them, and you'll find they RARELY EVER write stuff themselves to back up their b*tch fests.
I have enjoyed this fiction and continue to look forward to each new chapter. I'm a HUGE Trekkie. Aside from a few confusing matters that might be due to my distance from having watched any seasons for years, I've found nothing wrong with any terms, races, etc. You've been utterly creative and paired both genres magnificently. If people are gonna complain, then they had better put their money where their mouths are and WRITE THEIR OWN! Until they do, they're whistling in the wind.
Looking forward to the next chapter hun!
I love this story. While I'm not a huge hang-on follower of Predator, I have taken interest in them through the past years enough to have a pretty decent grasp on their culture and whatnot. And I can tell you this from what I have learned and what I have read in other fanfictions: people who say your yautja are too soft? They've only watched the movies. People who say your yautja are bullies? Never read the lore or comics around them. People who say they're not cannon? Elitists--better off ignored and deleted. You can never satisfy them, and you'll find they RARELY EVER write stuff themselves to back up their b*tch fests.
I have enjoyed this fiction and continue to look forward to each new chapter. I'm a HUGE Trekkie. Aside from a few confusing matters that might be due to my distance from having watched any seasons for years, I've found nothing wrong with any terms, races, etc. You've been utterly creative and paired both genres magnificently. If people are gonna complain, then they had better put their money where their mouths are and WRITE THEIR OWN! Until they do, they're whistling in the wind.
Looking forward to the next chapter hun!