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i love the story so far...however i am also wondering what happened to oona...i can't wait for the next chapter to come out

plz update this

Oooo! Evil Lili! How will she get revenge? O.o update soon please!!

I was jumping for joy when i saw that they had added a legend archive, but when i read that Lilli had died i was about to just ex off this story completely and stop reading it. I however kept reading in spite of my hatred for you changing the story around so much. I'm a little unsure of how i feel about it now that i have read the entire thing, I'm still pissed off beyond all measure about you changing it and making her die, but I'm also intrigued about the entire "Vampire" thing. How come you made Lucifer human looking when darkness is Devil looking? Its a little funny to me that Lilli would think dirty thoughts about Lucifer and its just because of my curiosity that I'm going to come back and see if you have posted new chapters and keep reading.

Please update! I want to know how this will turn out if Jack is good and Lili is bad! Ooo! and with Darkness as well! Please update soon!!!!!

I have this bad habit of reviewing only when I get done reading all of the chapters. Anyways, can't wait to see what you do with this story, it's really well done, even the movie bits :) Wonder what Jack is gonna do about Oona? Good luck in your real life and in this one.

Your exploring territory I've always been curious about. Very well done.

Damn Cliffhangers...can't wait to see what happens next..

well well well... i like it.


(there i promised to review.lol)

Ok... what will happen now?! Arrrghhh... waiting, waiting...
Hm, Darkness daddy really loves his sonny, ne? cares about his wellbeing^^ How does he look like?
And Jack... do I smell a small revenge plan here? I bet Lilly won't let it go so easily>_<