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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start to your story, I love it!
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FINISH PLEASE! I like it so far. It is a little jumpy but don't worry we all have that problem at some point.
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay... i love it so far! what happens next?
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like the way this stouy is going!Can't wait to see an update!
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH my ^.^ I like this, what will Jareth plan? He could always kidnapp the guy and take his place, or even better he could steal his daughter away to the labryinth forcing Sara to return. Ohhh so many possibilities! Write more please!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. Labrynth is one of my favorite movies...Bowie totally makes the film. Good Job, can't wait to see more
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, a new one in this section at last. It will be interesting seeing what you do with it.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Caught my attention. Hope you will write more soon. I would love to see your story unfold