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oh you are so evil! i want more!

I was lmao @ the last chapter..loved it!

I'm so glad to see that you updated this fic. I was afraid that you had forgotten about it. I'm also glad that Lizzie ended up with Jack (not that I ever doubted she wouldn't--heehee). My favorite part of this chapter was the "Maybe" conversation between Jack and Lizzie. That was so CUTE. I'm pleased to hear that a sequel is a possibility. I also like how you decided to let Will conspire with James against our hero and heroine. It was a nice touch to have both boys take the heart back to Beckett even if you did use a little poetic license to keep Norrington around long after DMC did. Lastly, thank you again for clarifying that "Izzy" wasn't a typo. Please understand that I wasn't criticizing the use of the pet name; I was just confused about whether or not it was intentional, and you are correct. There are many nicknames for Elizabeth including "Izzy".

bugger indeed! naughty, NAUGHTY jack! great fic, i can't wait to read the next. i love the way you mix emotion with perfectly executed smut. ;)

Beautifully done! Very hot!!!!!!

Absolutely awesome! Please update soon. You're a great writer.

PLEASE update soon! You write sex so damn well. Must. Have. More.......

Hooray!!!! Now, we're getting somewhere. Jack's patience with Lizzie's indecisiveness has worn thin. The best line in the fic so far is Jack's "I cringe when I think of you layin' with that boy". Jack ain't the only one; (By the way, the use of ain't isn't poor grammar. It's just a Southerner being a Southerner--snicker) I too "cringe" reading about her doing that with Will. YUCK!!!! Goody!!!! Even more the better, (couldn't resist using a Jack phrase there. It's bad when a movie character corrupts your grammar--chuckle) Will is starting to figure it out. Of course, it took a push from Norrington. That annoying former Commodore finally did something useful. And best of all, Will saw the proof for himself. I suspect the next chapter will get a little volatile, but Lizzie and Jack will soon end up together for good. And that will warrant the biggest and best cheer of all. I do have one question before I close this review. What's up with the use of "Izzy" in place of Lizzie? Is this Jack's new nickname for her or is it a typo? Please clarify this point in your next author's note. Thank you in advance. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I can't believe you stopped there! You're evil I tell you, just evil!(just teasing) I really love this story - can't wait to read what happens next. Of course, I'm going to have to go back and read the beginning again as to why exactly Norrington is there since he took off w/the heart at the end of DMC - see what you do to me I can't remember anything now! Augh.........

that...was hot!