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Yay!!!! You updated. I'm desperately hoping that this is the end of the Will sex scenes. I like how you had Jack waiting shirtless on his bed with his cabin door open to pounce on Lizzie like a tiger. I could so see him doing that. I'm also glad that Lzzie finally got to have a satisfying sexual experience. She knows the difference now, and she had better not go back to Will. I don't think Jack will let her either. She's his now, and I dare say he'll let Will know it...one way or the other. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

OMG! More - when will there be more? Had to read it again - I will agree W/E being intimate - EWwwww, well at least now she knows Jack is right (or GOD I hope she does!)

I'm with heartjd. Reading Will/Lizzie sex was ICKY!!!! But, I suppose she had to try the "boy" to realize that she wants/needs the "man". I'm glad that there is more story to read which means Lizzie will take Jack up on his offer (Hopefully, in the next chapter...hint hint. PLEASE!!!! I can't take reading any more of Will's sexual fumblings). Anyway, I'm glad that you as a writer see what I'm afraid Disney and the Pirates' writers do not. In fact, I have my doubts whether that bunch will ever see the light and come to their senses about the fact that Will and Lizzie have absolutely NO sexual chemistry. They have a friendship and a childhood infatuation with one another, but they have absolutely NO heat in their scenes together whereas Jack and Lizzie very nearly set the screen on fire. Perhaps, teenage girls see chemistry between Will and Lizzie, but I'm 31 years old, and past that point in my life. And if they end up together when this movie series is all said and done, It will be a CRIME!!!! And, I'll want to shoot something. And it won't be the poor, cute, little, undead monkey either. It'll be the mouse. Hear that Disney. If Jack and Lizzie don't end up together, I'm coming for Mickey. I'm a Georgia country girl too; so, I know how to shoot. Ahem!!!! My rant for the day is over. Back to your regularly scheduled review. Anyway, this is an interesting premise for a fic, and if your other work is any indication, then, this will be another wonderful fic from you. I eagerly await its continuation.

i like this! Please continue!

thank god, it's not a stand-alone! more more more! :D

It was hard to read will/liz sex, really... :/

thank god, it's not a stand-alone! more more more! :D

It was hard to read will/liz sex, really... :/

JACKS SUCH A TEASE!
grr.