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for Deliverance

by Bluemidget57

person Jo
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nope, we don't care about editing. Just post it! lol

Need. More. Now.

Pleeeaaassse!
person mapsan
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you - this is one of the best follow-ups to DMC that I have read. I love how you are weaving together everything and everyone. I love it and anxiously await your next chapter.
I know you are going to have to handle the Will and Liz situation -- I hope you will not make Will a total wimp (I know what Jack calls him, but really!). He is a strong man with strong convictions who would not want someone who doesn't want him. That said, I am definitely a Jack/Elizabeth fan.
thanks again and congratulations on a very entertaining, well-written tale.
person Jo
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Again! haha I simply love this story. You write so well, your Jack Voice is RIGHT ON, which I've found is a very difficult thing to do. Please update quickly!
person howlongmustiwait
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He admitted he loves her! I can't wait to see what happens when they find him. Hurry, hurry, hurry-PLEASE!
person anasazi
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Must. Have. More.
Soon.
Please?
person shel
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooo more krakens!
person shel
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im confused...why did Elizabeth puke?
Your writing is so fantastic. I loved this whole chapter. For some reason i really like Will going on and on about how intelligent jack is. hee hee.
he did forget to mention how dead sexy he is!
I cant wait to find out what happens next. please update soon!
person Kathleen
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely lovely! Can't wait for more! You have a nice introspective tone that suits well.
person me
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is bloody brilliant. update now!! i don't think i can wait for that long for your next chapter!!! i loved the build up of suspense and lovely plot! your writing is beautiful and flows very well. so excited. your suc a talented writer!! updateee!!! i beg of you!
person Jo
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I love your storyline, and it's so *well* written. Very nice. Keep up the great work!

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