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for Deliverance

by Bluemidget57

schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wowh! That has got to be one of the best sex scenes ever written. ;) Truly amazing. I cant believe how flawless your writing is. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahem, how to say this. That was HOT, beautiful, perfect, worth the wait! A thousand thank yous for writing such a brilliant story, and new chapter.
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woa! Wow! Bugger, it's so hot in here......moment, I have to open the window, the heat is unbearable..... ;o)
That was....that was.... just wow! There are no words to describe your excellent work, but there's one thing I can think of now:

P E R F E C T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much!

~Sassy~
person heartjd
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. Oh. My. God. Wonderful. Wow.... I have to.. wait a sec. *screams of joy* Aaaah, now I feel better. Thanks, hun!
person Jawala39
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You updated!!! Yeah!! *Happy dance* I love this story, so glad you are still updating. Excellent chapter as always...can't wait for the next one!! XXX
person Veralee
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent, excellent chapter. Thanks for the update and I look forward to more!
person heartJD
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooo happy you updated! Wonderful!!
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how excited I was to discover that you had posted a new chapter! And, as usual it was absolutely amazing, engrossing, and well written. I really love where the plot is going, and how the tattoos that J/E share serve as an implication that they should never part. Thank god that your fiction is different than AWE, I praise you for it! Can't wait for more of one of my most favorite fiction to be added, hopefully soon. ;D Yay!
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating! And of course I'm still and will be with you :o)
Please keep it up, you story is so exciting!!!!
Take care,

~Sassy~
person Trish
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating! I've been checking back frequently! Can't wait for more!