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FINALLY!! GOD it was worth the wait. 14 wonderful, amazing chapters, building that one... and the rest of it! Will you post the end of it before AWE opens?

I'm glad you're back, i'm glad surgery went wel... and I LOVED that chapter. sorry i took a while to review and i think i didn't reveiw last chapter... i haven't had exams until now, so i've been too busy to procrastinate efficiently ;). Anyways, update soon!

LOVE IT. Please continue to update. I so miss it when you update.

Terrific, but truly cruel to leave it there! Gah, please update soon!

I have been reading your journal though and I was pleased to hear your surgery went okay, despite your rough time in the wound healing, I hope you continue to improve.

So sorry to hear of your surgery. It's good that you're getting better and able to write again. I know I've certainly missed this story! Can't wait to see what comes next.

Excellent! Finally the "beguilement" from said pirate is being obliterated. I cannot wait for the next chapter! Jack and Lizzie in his cabin!! Woohooo!

Hope you continue getting better! ;D

Great story, flush with detail. There is a point though where the detail starts to bog down the story...We know Will is jealous and smothering, we know that Elizabeth is repentant and randy, we know that Jack troubled....just get on with the story, no need to continue to describe what you have already written about in much detail previously. Go with something new or move the story along. This is purely constructive criticism...I admire this story very much and will continue to read you following chapters, but I find myself skimming over much of what has been written in the last 5 chapters due to what I describe above.

Do hope that this continues. Update soon!

Best,
JMaX

Now that I've finally registered here I can let you know how much I love this story....but the suspense is KILLING me!!!!!
There is a lot of fanfic out there, and a lot of it makes me go, "HUH???" But yours is one of half a dozen that I have to check for updates every time I log on....

Please update soon!!!

BTW - I was thrilled to see you liked my first attempt at fanfic...thanks for reviewing!! It really is the first thing I've written, but I have the feeling it won't be the last.....

Words escape me. I feel I cannot possibly convey the enormity of this tale. It is, by far, the best I have ever read. And that isn't an exaggeration. Your penchant for weaving words and fabricating plots is rivaled only by your understanding of this story, and all the characters involved. It was as if I was reading the actual screenplay for the third movie itself. Absolutely breathtaking. In fact, my eyes hurt from skimming through each paragraph, eagerly anticipating twist after turn, too excited to slow down and properly read, positively dancing in my computer chair to discover the answer to that ever-asked question: what happens next? And, I'm still wondering. My imagination is impatient. More, more, more! I demand it! <3 Savvy?

Great story! Cant wait to read more!!!
chelsea x