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by Bluemidget57

schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uff..... that was not the reunion I was thinking about...... but what was I thinking? Jack's behavior is just normal, isn't it? They soon should have time to get some talky..... right? ;o)
Please keep it up!
Ta,
~Saskia~
person Lady Michele
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful! Love the new chapter! Isn't just like the whelp to try to keep her away from Jack. Anyway. I was thrilled to see your update - Can't wait for the next one. Please hurry! :)
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Agreed, Elisabeth does need to stop daydreaming. Lol. Overall, a good chapter, and I like how oblivous Jack can manage to be while believing he's got it all right. And about hte trailer, I'm actually excited to see the film! But anywho, I'd love to read the continuation on this story too!!! Update soon!
person heartJD
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo thought about the W/E kiss in the trailer when I read that chapter! Totally agree :D
Can't wait for the next chapter!
person howlongmustiwait
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOOOOOO excited to see an update! I'm w/Lizzie - when ARE they going to talk? **Whimpers** I hope it's soon! Love seeing Lizzie's thoughts on Jack though! And just what IS Barbossa up to and WHAT is Jack thinking he's up to? Puzzling....
person Jo
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely still reading here. :) Sometimes I have to log in... sometimes I don't. *shrug* But I'm definitely still reading and checking nearly daily for updates to this great story! Keep it up, please! :)
person Jamie
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great! Please continue!
person pirate lover 16
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is so good. omg i cant wait for the next chapter to come up. i will be right here reading it as soon as its posted and i get online next. keep up the good work! im offcially hooked.
person Anon
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I still live and I still review (I log in upon entering the site :P). YOU are an evil evil person, you're outright STALLING! They have to meet already, get it on with! but, I like the interactions between will and elizabeth and I like will's perspective and all in all this was a great chapter (but then again, wehn is it not?) update soon (AND HAVE THEM MEET!)
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I AM still reading this!!!! And I want a reunion - now! If that wasn't going to happen, I need my rum.......... off searching for the last bottle.....
Take care,
~Saskia~