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No we havent all gone away and logging in only takes a few seconds, really love this story please update soon, am I right in thinking that Jacks sudden weekness was directly linked to Lizzy waking up and that we are going to see that only one of them can be awake at a time, proberly some thing to do with the spell or the twin tattoos, or are you just being sneeky and keeping the suspenss going knowing all your readers are dying for the momment when they finally meet properly, either way I love it, keep it comeing.

Great new chapter (when are they not great?). I like that you provided a back story to the development of Will's feelings for Elizabeth. And, Barbossa..well.. he shall prove to be quite an annoyance for J/E aye? Ah, but the conflict is certainly necessary. I also love that you had Barbossa realize the symbolism of Jack saving Elizabeth by shooting him with his last bullet, this is indeed a key Sparrabeth moment. Last of all, the scene where Liz's hand becomes entwined with Jack's.. very touching and beautiful. Once again I must reiterate just how amazing this story is. I cannot wait for the next chapter, a J/E reunion hopefully!

YEAH an update! (strange it didn't ask me to log in....)I can definately hear the But, coming and call me cruel BUT, I can't wait! I'm wondering just what Hector is up to - hopefully Jack will be able to keep an eye on him and boot him off the ship ASAP. The thought of Jack losing the Pearl yet AGAIN just makes my skin crawl. Wonderful story - the best rescue scenario by far!

ACtually, I'm only partly dissapointed that you postponed the meeting, the story gives you legitimate reason, this chapter was really well written. update soon

Arrrrrgh..... you hit the point! ;o)
I was hoping for a reunion....... anyway, it'll come sooner or later (more sooner please?)
Anyway, it was some kind of fun imagining Will how he moved Lizzie from one place to another.... man, he must feel haunted, does he? LOL
Excellent chapter and I totally love your story with your outstanding writing style - please keep it up!
~Saskia~

Brilliant, as usual. Definitely the best post-DMC story.

I was so very excited to see that you had updated. Haven't been able to review before now and don't know if it'll let me later. That being said I absolutely adore this story. It's one of the best rescue scenarios I have read hands down! You have done a superb job of keeping the characters true. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful - can't wait to read more!

I do admit that I would have loved a reunion this chapter. But I understand how you needed to set it up, so that the plot would move smoothly, which you definitely did do. This only means that the next chapter and their subsequent reunion needs to be extra exciting, of which I have no doubts! It's great to read your writing again, please do update soon! ;D

This was a nice chapter, well written and with amusing moments (despite all the drama) but I can't say it blew me away completely. I liked will's naive assumptions, particularly when compared to all of Lizzie's previous thoughts, but it's those thoughts that actually bother me. I don't know, i dont think she'd completely bypass will for jack. You say all the time that she is debating herself over them, butwhenever its from her perspective all she thinks about is jack. But, either way, I'm sure this will end up as a great story!!!! UPDATE SOON!

wow wow wow. worth the wait! Though I hope we won't havfe to wait as much next time. LOVE IT!