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I LOVED this chapter! This story is so good. I know real life takes precedence, as it well should, but I certainly hope you'll update more soon! I am very anxious to see the interactions between our two heroes when they're both finally conscious and alert in the same room!

I LOVE the new chapter. This story is beyond excellent. You have a true talent for writing, especially keeping potc so true to its self.

I do have to admit that I want to smack Will around a bit though, he's being too possessive! ;D Which is a good dilemma for the storyline!

Pleeeeease update again soon.

As usual i loved this chapter!!! brilliant!! absolutely can't wait to see how he reacts to elizabeth. wake up godamn you!!! hahaha. You describe Will's thoughts very well, and true to the charachter. Once again well done. Soph xxx

I'm sooooooo very excited you updated! Are they going to be headed back to Tia Dalma's now? I'm quite curious as to what the explanations are going to be. Hope you update again soon. I've been checking periodically to see if you have and when I saw you had today I was practically jumping for joy!

I'm too tired to review this articulately: YOU RULE! update sooN!

I love the idea of Calypso being Tia's sister instead of Tia herself. That would make so much more sense, to me at least, when remembering how proud Tia seemed to be when telling the story of Jones and how his lady love had jilted him, like she's proud of her sister for breaking his heart or something. Don't know how to explain it, but I like it nonetheless.

This is a really great story. I really like the storyline and can't wait to see where you take it next!

Btw, I was the 'Jo' who was commenting. Since AFF made everyone actually register to log in and review, Moe Sparrow's what I came up with (Jo was too short). Just wanted you to know 'Jo' didn't disappear on ya. :)

wow! excellent chapter!! its such an interesting plot! and i hope jack is maybe just abit angry with elizabeth...because i quite like agnsty stuff...hehehe but i still want it to be a J/E ending!! i just like the bittersweet love between them! another beautifully written chapter! well done! and please update soon!!! xxx

by the way, im "soph" who got an account. i think adultfanfiction has changed the rules. your not allowed to review stories now if you don't have an account! xxx

Great new chapter! Very interesting and entertaining descriptions of the ritual! And yet again an excellent cliffhanger. Please do provide the next chapter soon, I love this story so much!

Come on!!! what are you waiting for!!! UPDATE!!! and yes polls say they WILL meet next chapter, they have to! be nice! (can you tell i like your story? a lot? please update soon!)