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September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was in fact a great steamy story, but what made it so much more was your comment about the pringles. It made my day, thank you!
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So cool!
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(nosebleed) God damn that was fucking hot!!!! That was the hotest story I have ever read in my life! Damn, it got me horny & not a alot of stories get me horny. Great work.
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I liked it. It was sort of cute too.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was nice to go straight to the naughty stuff, after all the fics I've read that build and build...
Everyone was in character, 'tough love' that makes me giggle and fidget while I read. Great sex scene too! FINALLY someone mentions Red's obviously huge penor. Clever use of the pringle can comparison, everyone knows what those look like, it's hard to visualize 'this many inches thus, and that many inches so' descriptions.
Everyone was in character, 'tough love' that makes me giggle and fidget while I read. Great sex scene too! FINALLY someone mentions Red's obviously huge penor. Clever use of the pringle can comparison, everyone knows what those look like, it's hard to visualize 'this many inches thus, and that many inches so' descriptions.
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I don't think I've ever left a review for this and I've read it a few dozen times. I know you probably wrote this awhile ago, but I love it! I think you nailed the characters, from HB's teasing to John's reactions to him. I think this is one of my favs in this archive. Nice work.
Oh, and I totally understand the weirdness. My inspiration comes from the strangest places too.
Oh, and I totally understand the weirdness. My inspiration comes from the strangest places too.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow… Your influence scares me…. Pringles… I shall never look at them the same way again…
I’ll still eat ‘em though! –Laughs’ madly.-
Great job dude. I love it. The ending gives that fluffy feeling.
I’ll still eat ‘em though! –Laughs’ madly.-
Great job dude. I love it. The ending gives that fluffy feeling.
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god i'll never look at pringles the same way again! anyway, this was soooo hot *squeal*
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Bacon" that was so cute. I love John's list of priorities, Food seems to be very important.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely fantastic! I loved the pringles can comparison, the list and just overall the great energy you get from this fic. It made me feel happy and it made me laugh, go aww, and of course turn as red as the original pringle can. I hope to see more in the future from you. Thank you for sharing your writing.
Nymph
Nymph