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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit.... this is really hot. I have always wanted to see a fanfic that was Anna and one or all of the brides... yours is great! though I do wish Carl hadn't had to die *pouts* I love Carl. Anywho it was really good and I loved it.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. Well explained. Not too long. Will there be a sequel or another chapter?
suggestion: Could do with a bit more seduction. and try to show more fear from anna as to whats happened and how she feels about it. Does she accept it? does she feel suicidle? does she feel neutral?
would like to read more.
suggestion: Could do with a bit more seduction. and try to show more fear from anna as to whats happened and how she feels about it. Does she accept it? does she feel suicidle? does she feel neutral?
would like to read more.